Thank you all for participating in the vignette. Our winners are Sanste and BlueGhostofSeaside respectively.
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Black Shadow receives 150 experience.
Use of Topic: It's on topic and a great encounter.
Creativity: I think I've seen something like this somewhere before, but I don't know.
Mechanics: There was only one spelling error and that's it.
Notes: It was a great read and I enjoyed it.
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BlueGhostofSeaside receives 240 experience and 150 gold.
Use of Topic: A great encounter between angry uncle and hated niece.
Creativity: Creative but familiar.
Mechanics: Didn't see any mistakes in this, you are getting better at writing.
Notes: I love and loathe the cliffhanger ending.
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Good for Nothing Captain receives 100 experience.
Use of Topic: On topic and interesting way of looking at it.
Creativity: I never thought of the fact that we are our character's worst enemies.
Mechanics: No mistakes my friend.
Notes: I usually hate it when people break the fourth wall. But it still was well executed.
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Oliver receives 200 experience.
Use of Topic: Hmm, they don't look like enemies...
Creativity: I love that they talk in front of a duck pond.
Mechanics: There were many spelling mistakes but that's it.
Notes: “Sorry ducks, I didn’t know!” Best line of the story.
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Leopold receives 200 experience.
Use of Topic: I'm guessing the enemy is Lady Clarissa.
Creativity: It's a literal meeting!
Mechanics: A few things here and there but besides that well done.
Notes: It feels incomplete.
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Dr. Why receives 100 experience.
Use of Topic: Definitely an enemy.
Creativity: Not much different from Dr. Who.
Mechanics: A spelling mistake here and there.
Notes: The fact that you practically copied Dr. Who hurt your score. Be more original when using this character and your score should go up.
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Sanste receives 200 experience and 200 gold.
Use of Topic: It's there, if you squint.
Creativity: I actually like that this was in his dream.
Mechanics: Near perfection.
Notes: Dream mode rocks and rolls.
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Lucius receives 100 experience.
Use of Topic: Interesting act.
Creativity: You took the flexible time line literally going in the future.
Mechanics: Few mistakes.
Notes: I like how it is more futuristic than historical or modern.