Kratos meets Astaroth
But so much cooler
5/10
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Kratos meets Astaroth
But so much cooler
5/10
Althanas' Vishnu, almost to the letter w/ a trite backstory. Only Chris' solid storywriting has prevented Shinsou from being a marysue.
5/10.
Thank god someone is judging Shin on something other than his cover!
Max Dirks is overlord. 0/10.
Same as last time/10
Smollest ragechild
He's a hunter who hunts big, scary things! With a big scary spear! But also a Drow.
4/10
Being a neko automatically docks originality points. She's rambunctious, energetic, and seems to be an optimist. Also, (biological) parents are dead or missing cliche.
8/10 Still love your character though! Our insaniac teenage girl characters should get together and burninate towns or something sometime! B)
7/10, because I know next to nothing about your character but can gather most of it from avatar and profile blurb alone.
Cocky, know-it-all street fighter, huh? Some things like the "I'm a street fighter nobody but I'd love to rule the world" and the fact that he can summon a troll adds a little bit of originality, but...
7/10
Felicity is a half-neanderthal lady berserker harbouring seemingly uncontrollable magic. She gets stronger when wounded as you'd expect from a berserker, but her blood is mildly caustic and she gives off nuclear radiation. A living bomb with a temper to match but also has a scientific mind for alchemy. A fighter that probably enjoys picking flowers for potions.
2/10. I imagine Felicity to be the end result of asking the question, "How do I take the common fighter archetype and run the hell away from all the cliches?"