Search:

Type: Posts; User: Revenant

Page 1 of 20 1 2 3 4

Search: Search took 0.04 seconds.

  1. Replies
    5
    Views
    175

    I’ll try my best to give you some feedback, but I...

    I’ll try my best to give you some feedback, but I am far from a professional here. I’m just a guy who reads a lot. Please keep that in mind when looking at my feedback.

    Storytelling: This felt...
  2. Replies
    5
    Views
    113

    The legends say that at the moment the expedition...

    The legends say that at the moment the expedition broke the threshold between the end of the land and the place of the elder evil they were set upon by its terrible hunger. They felt the cold...
  3. Replies
    9
    Views
    246

    “Jensen?” William laughed, though there was...

    “Jensen?” William laughed, though there was little mirth left in the sound. “As if that walking mass of insanity deserves anyone’s pity.”

    William thought back to the time he’d seen Jensen. It was...
  4. Replies
    5
    Views
    113

    The sun, in its slow march toward the evening...

    The sun, in its slow march toward the evening horizon, was just now reaching behind the tops of the trees. The light pushed long, grasping shadows out towards William, emphasizing the dark words that...
  5. Replies
    9
    Views
    246

    Silence filled the sun lounge, the uncomfortable...

    Silence filled the sun lounge, the uncomfortable sense of malice between its three occupants almost a physical thing. Pretending not to notice, William carried on casually. There was a momentary...
  6. Thread: Hero Forge

    by Revenant
    Replies
    12
    Views
    205

    I'll give mine a try!...

    I'll give mine a try!
    http://orig04.deviantart.net/3d91/f/2017/126/4/4/arcus_by_svvcdark-db8dbf0.png
  7. Replies
    3
    Views
    134

    I wouldn't mind helping you kill things. It's...

    I wouldn't mind helping you kill things. It's sort of what I do.
  8. Replies
    9
    Views
    111

    Happy birthday, Brother Pav.

    Happy birthday, Brother Pav.
  9. Replies
    5
    Views
    122

    Flying pie slice. TIE Interceptor? Batman,...

    Flying pie slice.
    TIE Interceptor?
    Batman, but which one? Adam West has the camp, Michael Keaton was the best Bruce Wayne, but LEGO Batman is a strong contender.
    Let off some steam, Bennet!...
  10. Replies
    5
    Views
    113

    William nodded eagerly. He knew many of the...

    William nodded eagerly. He knew many of the stories about the Old Masters and the strange powers that they’d commanded. Of course he’d heard this entire story a dozen times before, it was one of his...
  11. Replies
    9
    Views
    246

    The silver bird beside William’s bed chirped....

    The silver bird beside William’s bed chirped. Cautiously, William took the jug of beer from his lips and peered at the sculpture warily. It was a fancy contraption, one the Auburn prided itself on....
  12. Replies
    5
    Views
    113

    One day the land was as it had always been, and...

    One day the land was as it had always been, and the next the elder evil was there.

    The violence of the elder evil’s arrival wounded the land in a way that it had never known before. Merely...
  13. Replies
    15
    Views
    253

    Birthday!

    Birthday!
  14. Replies
    8
    Views
    223

    Heyo! Lords know Iím nothing more than a guy who...

    Heyo! Lords know Iím nothing more than a guy who reads a lot, so all Iím going to bring to the table is what thoughts I had while reading your story. Take it or leave it. Youíll probably want to...
  15. Thread: Althanas: TNG

    by Revenant
    Replies
    45
    Views
    882

    There are people who don't like TNG?

    There are people who don't like TNG?
  16. Replies
    5
    Views
    113

    This is a tale of the times before. “Before...

    This is a tale of the times before.

    “Before what?” William blurted, interrupting immediately. Gerard stopped and looked sideways at William, a frown of disapproval turning down the corners of his...
  17. Replies
    9
    Views
    246

    William was dozing lightly when the knock...

    William was dozing lightly when the knock sounded. He came to with a start, blinking in confusion at the offending door. The surprise passed quickly though and William rolled off the lounging chair...
  18. Replies
    14
    Views
    345

    Serious Finsou fish saying "Nom" made me laugh....

    Serious Finsou fish saying "Nom" made me laugh. This is a great start, man. I used to program and I know that while it doesn't look flashy, you're taking the necessary small steps to something...
  19. Replies
    5
    Views
    113

    Tales of Amra - The Gates of Bardin

    ďAlright Will, careful now,Ē Gerard Arcus said. He stood over his latest project with his arms outstretched, an intricately carved oak mantle held in taut suspension over an equally intricate set...
  20. Replies
    11
    Views
    287

    Heyo! Seeing how many people have given good...

    Heyo! Seeing how many people have given good advice already, Iím just going to go post by post and give my less-than-professional-writer thoughts on your story. Avante!

    Post 1:
    You start...
  21. Replies
    8
    Views
    257

    Heyo! I’m certainly no professional writer, but...

    Heyo! I’m certainly no professional writer, but you asked for comments so do what you will with my thoughts on your story.

    Story:
    This was a nice, quick story that flowed together well. Though...
  22. Replies
    13
    Views
    410

    Well this is a somewhat bittersweet thread for...

    Well this is a somewhat bittersweet thread for me. I’ve spent quite a lot of time with Talen, from when he was a fresh faced boy-thing back in the Ixian days to the latest LCC. I suppose that it’s a...
  23. Replies
    1
    Views
    73

    Hopefully I'm doing this right. Short Summary:...

    Hopefully I'm doing this right.
    Short Summary:

    The search for knowledge can be both enlightening and deadly, as FennWenn discovers in this Lovecraftian inspired tale. After discovering that the...
  24. Replies
    10
    Views
    306

    H.P. Lovecraft is one of my favorite authors and...

    H.P. Lovecraft is one of my favorite authors and I have read all of the works that he wrote or collaborated on in what would later become the “Cthulhu Mythos.” As such, I was excited to see the...
  25. Replies
    7
    Views
    154

    Apologies for the slight delay. Work related...

    Apologies for the slight delay. Work related stuff. But delay no more, because the initial post is up!

    There are still other threads to be written for anyone else interested.
Results 1 to 25 of 500
Page 1 of 20 1 2 3 4