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    My lack of setting in this mostly dialogue and body language post is disturbing. :P Still, I had a hard time wording Felicity's dialogue, but it's so in character for her it was a blessing in disguise xD Poor, angry girl thinks Yvonne hates her!
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    Aye, me setting be no better. Ta be fair we have had our fill of describing jungle for tha moment, haha. Important discussions be happening! We will describe surrounds when we go into Donnalaich again, promise.
    So I’m cutting that branch off the cherry tree.
    Singing this will be my victory.
    Then I, I see them coming after me.
    And they’re following me across the sea.
    And now they’re stinging my friends and my family.
    And I, I don’t know why this is happening.
    ~ Thrice, Black Honey.

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    Nev, several questions about your post:

    1.) What exactly is "gruesome" about ripping a creature's core out? If Felicity's Berserk Rage was ramped up enough she could do it with her bare fist; especially with the golem not being brick hard rock. Or am I misunderstanding?
    2.) Is Nevin using Hungering Threads ability on the arm?
    Thanks!


    Yvonne, yeah we can ramp up setting later. I guess I have an obsession with getting setting right since I know it's a weak area of mine. :P And the part where Yvonne jokes about wrapping Felicity up, and her reaction, was hilarious!
    Last edited by Flamebird; 05-11-2018 at 07:54 PM.
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    Sorry to everyone I haven't replied to yet. I hit a hard streak, am completely exhausted, burning out; and on a lot of threads I suddenly hit writer's block. I'll try to respond soon! Hopefully this weekend.
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    Ye get yerself a nap dear. Ye'll feel a lot better for it.
    So I’m cutting that branch off the cherry tree.
    Singing this will be my victory.
    Then I, I see them coming after me.
    And they’re following me across the sea.
    And now they’re stinging my friends and my family.
    And I, I don’t know why this is happening.
    ~ Thrice, Black Honey.

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    Forgiveness is awesome. Felicity is awesome. Ashla is so cool. Needs a spell check and a link to the vignette.
    So I’m cutting that branch off the cherry tree.
    Singing this will be my victory.
    Then I, I see them coming after me.
    And they’re following me across the sea.
    And now they’re stinging my friends and my family.
    And I, I don’t know why this is happening.
    ~ Thrice, Black Honey.

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    *Crawls out of ground* THE SUN AT LAST!! TIME TO CONQUER THE WOOOOOORLD!

    Actually, I'm not ready to become that active again. :P I think I miiiiight be able to reply some threads. Maybe. I tried writing a June Vignette submission the other day and... it sucked.

    But whatever.

    Forgiveness is awesome. Felicity is awesome. Ashla is so cool.
    Thanks, Yvonne!


    While I attempt to get past writer's block, I had this random, out of nowhere scene that crossed my mind:


    Everywhere in visible sight, a single shade of color splotched the whole place.

    Red.

    It was on the ground, on her, on him. It made massive puddles surrounding their crimson painted frames. She lay across from him, exhausted and torn apart. In long, deep breaths, she watched the corpse bleed out even more. Her body felt as if a heavy weight was thrusted on it. As she wheezed, her warm breath caused the velvet liquid at her lips ripple. As blood soaked her sticky, heavy body, her dead eyes continued to barely close.

    She had a rule and she broke it. In blind rage, which was not bolstered in any way by her powers, she broke it. She broke the rule, and now she felt as if her heart was being stabbed violently with jaged knives. This guilt was tearing her apart. The shame humiliated her inside. She could not close her circled eyes. When she did she was net with ger ultimate disappointment.

    She could ask why - if it were not for the fact she could list the reasons and circumstances. No, she knew
    why, yet the question of what hissed into her ear.

    ... Had she just committed murder?



    I have no idea what on earth would lead up to or follow this scene, but I just have to do something with this now! I have no idea what would drive Felicity to kill under circumstances. Maybe if someone she loved was threatened she would do it - if at her end's wits. I don't know...

    Brainstorming tiiiime!
    Last edited by Flamebird; 06-16-2018 at 04:39 PM.
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    Oh, this is awesome. My innocent little Fel, corrupted by a horrible, horrible world... The poor dear.

    Well the man obviously had it coming. He would have infuriated her, provoked her, taunted her. Until she saw red and couldn't handle her anger anymore. Perhaps he wanted her to bash him, injure him, make a scene so that she would have consequences to deal with while he would be taken elsewhere on a stretcher, to be mended.

    He didn't think she was capable of taking his stupid life away, just beating his ugly mug in enough to draw attention. Maybe they were both prisoners and he wanted a different cell, something like that, or maybe he had something against neanderthals or held a personal grudge over something she had done in the past, which affected him indirectly.

    However you decide, I like the added black streak through Felicity's personality. It could put her and those that help her on the wrong side of the law, whether they deserve to be there or not, and that's interesting reading no?

    Great to see you about dear.
    So I’m cutting that branch off the cherry tree.
    Singing this will be my victory.
    Then I, I see them coming after me.
    And they’re following me across the sea.
    And now they’re stinging my friends and my family.
    And I, I don’t know why this is happening.
    ~ Thrice, Black Honey.

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