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    The Huntsman's Avatar

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    Name
    Fil'ayn Kiljarden
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    87
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    Drow
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    Workshop: Along Came A Spider

    What is the name of your thread?: Along Came A Spider
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  2. #2
    my weakness is that i i scared very soon of most of such a things and i trust quickly on others.

  3. #3
    Legend

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    Philomel's Avatar

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    Philomel van der Aart (+ Veridian)
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    30 (+10)
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    Faun (+ Fox/Earth Spirit)
    Gender
    Female (+ Male)
    Location
    Corone

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    Hi, I recognise this has been around for some time.
    *admin at your service*

    Matriarch of the Gilded Lily and of its brothels, associated establishments and the army.

    Characters:
    The family triplet: Philomel, Vaeron and Celandine.
    The god and kenku triplet: Stare, Avin and Vixen.
    The Primordials: Professor Charles and Moros.

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    Legend

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    Level completed: 55%,
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    Philomel's Avatar

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    Philomel van der Aart (+ Veridian)
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    30 (+10)
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    Faun (+ Fox/Earth Spirit)
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    Corone

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    This workshop is closed. Discussion with the participant.
    *admin at your service*

    Matriarch of the Gilded Lily and of its brothels, associated establishments and the army.

    Characters:
    The family triplet: Philomel, Vaeron and Celandine.
    The god and kenku triplet: Stare, Avin and Vixen.
    The Primordials: Professor Charles and Moros.

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