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  1. #11
    Viator Mundi

    EXP: 155,108, Level: 17
    Level completed: 18%, EXP required for next Level: 14,892
    Level completed: 18%,
    EXP required for next Level: 14,892


    Shinsou Vaan Osiris's Avatar

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    7,753

    Name
    Shinsou Vaan Osiris
    Age
    34
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    Telgradian
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    Male
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    Thank you all for your participation in this Althanas Day Vignette! This is just a courtesy update to let you know we haven't forgotten you; in fact, I am personally dealing with this judgment and hope to have it up by the end of the weekend!

    Thank you for your patience!

  2. #12
    Viator Mundi

    EXP: 155,108, Level: 17
    Level completed: 18%, EXP required for next Level: 14,892
    Level completed: 18%,
    EXP required for next Level: 14,892


    Shinsou Vaan Osiris's Avatar

    GP
    7,753

    Name
    Shinsou Vaan Osiris
    Age
    34
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    Telgradian
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    1st Place - Gum

    You did a superb job of sticking to the prompt, whilst engaging the reader in an original story that put another angle on who the burden really was to Gum.

    What I liked the most about this piece was the quality of Gum's character - a shaman that so easily comes across as sympathetic that even the act of killing the pet's owner comes across as merciful, if not a little shocking, in the context of the story. As usual your mechanics were excellent and your technique ensures that the reader isn't getting bored halfway through. Excellent work!

    2nd Place - Rayleigh

    As with Gum, I felt you did extremely well in sticking to the prompt. What made this stand out was Rayleigh's initial abhorrence at the idea of Vincent simply picking up a stray from Lindqualm, as if it were completely fine to do that, and Vincent's total lack of worry. I also appreciated the humor of Rayleigh comparing the dog to a horse, and referring to it as such for the remainder of the thread.

    Technique and mechanics are your strong suite, and very little was wrong with either. In this vignette's case, there seemed to be many "dog" type pets but at least you mixed it up a bit by making it a beast from the cursed Red Forest.

    3rd Place - Philomel

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    Gum receives 1200 EXP, 600 GP and 6 AP!

    Rayleigh receives 1680 EXP, 450 GP and 3 AP!

    Philomel receives 1800 EXP and 3 AP!

    All other entrants receive 3 AP!

    All rewards inclusive of Althanas Day 3x rewards!

  3. #13
    Legend

    EXP: 127,650, Level: 15
    Level completed: 55%, EXP required for next Level: 7,350
    Level completed: 55%,
    EXP required for next Level: 7,350


    Philomel's Avatar

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    14,025

    Name
    Philomel van der Aart (+ Veridian)
    Age
    30 (+10)
    Race
    Faun (+ Fox/Earth Spirit)
    Gender
    Female (+ Male)
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    Corone

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