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  1. #11
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    Philomel van der Aart (+ Veridian)
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    Done a fair bit of nuking ... How does that fit now? Only thing next I can think of doing is getting rid of Rest, then getting rid of Mao, though I am loathe to do so.
    Last edited by Philomel; 10-17-2017 at 01:28 PM.

  2. #12
    upon the cheek of night

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    Joshua Breaker Cronen
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    Phew, that was a lot. I've re-evaluated the profile and Phi's still coming in about 40 points over. Based on my analysis, I have a couple of suggestions that might help.

    -Consider removing redundant abilities such as Phi's skin mutations. Right now she has steel-strength skin, which grows stronger when she mutates into one form and to a different strength when she mutates to the other form. By just giving her skin a constant value and removing the variables connected to the mutations, you could easily trim off about 20 points.
    -I did a quick count, and with everything included you have approximately 34 abilities. Compare this to SirArtemis, who is level 12, and only has 24 abilities. Basically what I'm saying is, you may need to cut/lock a few more abilities to get into acceptable range.

    Here's a couple specific suggestions:

    -If you leave Phi's skin at steel strength and remove the skin enhancements from her mutations, that'd deduct 20 points.
    -If you lock Rest, that'd deduct 4 points
    -If you make Mao a non-combative familiar, that'd remove 11 points.

    Which would make a total of 35, which is ALMOST the 40 we need. Because of the circumstances, if you can make these changes or other changes that will have a similar effect, I'll make an exception and approve you with the understanding that your next level update will need to be a modest one. Thanks for working with me on this, I know it must be frustrating.

  3. #13
    Legend

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    Philomel van der Aart (+ Veridian)
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    I honestly do not understand how she was taken through at level 10 then. Currently her, as is, is weaker from then.

    I will have look but a lot of the things I have been riding with for a very long time. The skin mutation is partly key to her, but I will need to get back to you later. Its just crazy that it was fine before ... somehow.

    Mao is 11 points on her own. O_o

  4. #14
    Legend

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    Mao's Silent Ability removed.
    Delath's skin strength reduced to steel.
    Skin strength during Raging state removed (remains at steel).
    Skin during Enraged reduced to damascus.
    Rest removed.

    Looking at more but this is what I have so far.

  5. #15
    upon the cheek of night

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    As I mentioned before, there has not been a workup done on Philomel since level 8. She was taken through at previous levels because, unfortunately, staffers didn't bother to measure her abilities. Essentially she's been rubber stamped for the past three or four updates and this allowed her to exceed the kind of powers we permit at any level. I would encourage you to compare Phi to other characters of similar levels rather than comparing her to what was previously permitted. As I mentioned, she has ten more abilities than SirArtemis, who is a level higher. Giving a character such an arsenal of abilities is going to run up your TPL.

    edit: Let me know when you're done editing and I'll re-assess again.

  6. #16
    Legend

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    Mao's Silent Ability removed.
    Delath's skin strength reduced to steel.
    Skin strength during Raging state removed (remains at steel).
    Skin during Enraged removed (therefore steel).
    Rest removed.
    Locked Earth Sense: Education.
    Following Amendum added to Mao:
    Amendum: Mao CANNOT use this ability in combat. Neither can she bite or attack. She can only sit there and watch and be a pretty rabbit. At best she can be a distraction.

    Does that get closer for you?
    Last edited by Philomel; 10-19-2017 at 11:45 AM.

  7. #17
    upon the cheek of night

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    Looks like you're still 10 points over. If you can get at least five more off (for example, lock one more ability) I'll approve this.

  8. #18
    Legend

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    Locked both The Rabbit sword abilities for now.
    Unlocked Earth Sense: Education.

    Basically swapped out one.

    Suit?

  9. #19
    upon the cheek of night

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    Approved.

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