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    EXP: 127,650, Level: 15
    Level completed: 55%, EXP required for next Level: 7,350
    Level completed: 55%,
    EXP required for next Level: 7,350


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    14,025

    Name
    Philomel van der Aart (+ Veridian)
    Age
    30 (+10)
    Race
    Faun (+ Fox/Earth Spirit)
    Gender
    Female (+ Male)
    Location
    Corone

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    Workshop: The Raven, The Haven and The Craven

    Name of Completed thread: The Raven, The Haven and the Craven
    Name of Authors: Leopold and Duffy (same author)
    Type of Thread: Quest
    Thread Length: 24 posts
    Feedback Rewards: (Post Length of Thread/10) * ((EXP Needed to Level)*0.05) EXP
    Date Closed: 5th December 2017

    Note as requested from author: Respectful request from author for specific feedback on Action in Character. Thank you!

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    Last edited by Philomel; 11-05-2017 at 06:21 AM.

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