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    Workshop: Legitimate AF (Mature)

    Name of Completed Thread: Legitimate AF (Mature)
    Name of Authors: Capoeirista
    Type of Thread: Quest
    Thread Length: 12 Posts
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    Date Closed: 13th February 2018

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    Matriarch of the Gilded Lily and of its brothels, associated establishments and the army.

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    The family triplet: Philomel, Vaeron and Celandine.
    The god and kenku triplet: Stare, Avin and Vixen.

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    Matriarch of the Gilded Lily and of its brothels, associated establishments and the army.

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    Characters:
    The family triplet: Philomel, Vaeron and Celandine.
    The god and kenku triplet: Stare, Avin and Vixen.

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