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Drake
05-21-06, 02:06 PM
Name: Drake
Age: appears 25
Race:shadow demon
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Red
Height: 7,10
Weight: 200 lbs

Personality: Drake loves to kill more than any thing else, he hates large crowds and has a temper matched only by a fire dragon

Appearance: Drake looks like pure shadows and has burning red eyes all who see him fear him, but he only looks like that when he is angry and when he is fighting, other than that he looks completely human

Items/Equipment: Drake has two shadow blades that he can summon up whenever he needs them and has throwing knives in a cape on his back, he also has a ninja star holster on his right leg

Skills:

Shadow meld: Drakes ability to meld with the shadows is only temporary and last 2 minutes and he is only able to use it three times a thread.

Shadow blades: Drakes ability to draw blades made of pure shadow he is able to summon out of himself. His shadow blades are so cold that when they hit someone they stun them for a few seconds of pure coldness. They last for five minutes or five posts whatever comes first. He can only use this two times a thread.

History: not much is known about drake. He came out of no where 5 years ago and has been killing ever since, but since the world runs on money he accepts jobs to get some spending cash. But he has a dark past that will haunt him forever.

He was once a human but when he was 5 he saw his father slowly kill his mother then kill himself. This happened in all the places he lived in and to the people he cared about so he shut out emotion forever and let shadow demons enter his body and soul.

Cyrus the virus
05-21-06, 08:27 PM
I'd like to know more about his shadow blades. Do they have any special properties? Are they hot? When he summons them, how long are they present before they disappear again?

Everything else seems fine, but I'd like some kind of description of how skilled he is with his blades. Being an expert, or far advanced at level 0 is unreasonable, so you need to tell us just how good he is. Use a number out of 10 if that's easier for you. On scale like that, he shouldn't be any better than 2 (this skill can get better as you level).

Drake
05-21-06, 08:49 PM
ok i have edited it

Cyrus the virus
05-21-06, 08:52 PM
Okay, that'll do. Approved.