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Skie and Avery
01-26-08, 10:06 PM
Althanas has had a few poetry battles and poetry themed characters before. I was wondering how many of it's members actively listened to poets? Post em if ya got em.

I've a fondness for Saul Williams. One of his poems can be found here (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PFaf4ri_blg). It starts about twenty seconds in, but for those of you who can't watch youtube videos, here it is.

Gypsy Girl by Saul Williams:

And she doesn't want to press charges
My yellow cousin
Ghost of a gypsy
Drunk off the wine of pressed grapes
Repressed screams
Of sun shriveled raisins
And their dreams
Interrupted
By a manhood deferred

Will she ever sober?
Or will they keep handing her glasses overflowing
With the burden of knowing

I never knew

Never knew it could haunt me

The ghost of a little girl in the desolate mansion
Of my manhood
I'm a man now

And then

I remember that I have been charged
One million volts of change

Will the ghost of that little girl ever meet my little girl

She's one now
She must have been three then
Maybe four

She�s eighteen now
I'm twenty-five now
I must have been twelve then
My mother said he was in his forties
And she's not pressing charges
Although she's been indicted
And I can't blame her

I can't calm her

I want to calm her

I want to call him names
But only mine seem to fit

"Come on, let's see if it fits"
Two little boys with a magic marker marked her

"They put it in me"

"No we didn't, what are you talking about?"

"It's not permanent, It'll come out when you wash it"

Damn, maybe it was permanent
I can't forget
And I hope she doesn't remember

Maybe Magic marked her
Lord, I hope he don't pull no dead rabbit out of that hat
What ya gonna do then?

And what was Mary's story?

The story of a little girl with a brother and a couch
She's got a brother
A couch
A sister locked in her bedroom
And a mother on vacation

Lord, don't let her fall asleep
Her brother's got keys to her dreams
He keeps them on a chain
That now cuffs his wrists together

Mommy doesn't believe he did it
But he's left footprints on the insides of his sister's eyelids
And they've learned to walk without him and haunt her daily prayers

And if you rub your fingers
Ever so softly on her inner thigh
She'll stop you
Having branded your fingertips
With the footprints of her brother
The disbelief of her mother
And a sister who called her a slut for sleeping

Lord, I've known sleeping women
Women who have slept for lives at a time
On sunny afternoons and purple evenings
Women who sleep sound
And live silently
Some dreams never to be heard of again

I've known sleeping women
They've taught me to sleep having swallowed the moon
Sleep till mid afternoon
And yearn for the silence of night
Too sleep sound once again
Painters of the wind
Who know to open the window
Before closing their eyes
Finding glory in the palette of their dreams

She had no dreams that night
The windows had been closed

The worlds of her subconscious suffocated and bled
Rivers of unanticipated shivers and sounds
That were not sleep
She was sound asleep
And he came silently

It wasn't the sun in her eyes
Nor the noise of children en route to school
She woke to the rays of an ingrown sun
Fungus that stung more than it burned
A saddened school en route to children
Who dare to sleep on a couch
Exposed to their schizophrenic brother
Only to wake with a new personality

One that doesn't trust as much as it used to
And wears life jackets into romantic relationships
Can't stand the touch of fingertips
Damn, was that marker permanent
I hope she doesn't press charges
I hope they don't press no more grapes into wine
Because she might get drunk again
And fall asleep

Rise and shine my mother used to say
Pulling back the clouds of covers that warmed our nights
But the fleshy shadows of that moonless night
Stored the venom in its fangs to extinguish the sun

Rise and shine
But how can I?
When I have crusted cloud configurations pasted to my thighs
And snow covered mountains
In my memories
They peak into my day
And structure my moment
They hide in the corners of my smile
And in the shadows of my laughter

They've stuffed my pillows with over exposed reels of ABC after school specials
And the feathers of woodpeckers
That have bore hollows into the rings of time
That now ring my eyes
And have stumped the withered trunk of who I am

I must remember

My hands have been tied behind the back of another day
If only I could have them long enough to dig up my feet
Which have been planted beneath the soiled sheets
Of a harvest that only hate could reap

I keep trying to forget

But I must remember

And gather the scattered continents
Of a self once whole
Before they plant flags
And boundary my destiny
Push down the warted mountains that blemish the soiled soul
Before the valleys of my conscience get the best of me
I'll need a passport just to simply reach the rest of me
A vaccination
For a lesser Gods bleak history.

Edward Judorne
01-30-08, 11:15 AM
I used to listen to poetry, now I write it. My mom actually once got a poem I wrote published in a newsletter, An aspergergers syndrome newsletter, but a newsletter, nonetheless. I'll post it up here next time I get the chance.

Elijah_Morendale
02-03-08, 08:24 PM
I'm not much of a poetry fan myself, but I'll occasionally swing through a Shel Silverstein book.

"TRUE STORY"

This morning I jumped on my horse
And went out for a ride,
And some wild outlaws chased me
And they shot me in the side
So I crawled into a wildcat's cave
To find a place to hide,
But some pirates found me sleeping there,
And soon they had me tied
To a pole and built a fire
Under me--I almost cried
Till a mermaid came and cut me loose
And begged to be my bride,
So I said I'd come back Wednesday
But I must admit I lied.
Then I ran into a jungle swamp
But I forgot my guide
And I stepped into some quicksand,
And no matter how I tried
I couldn't get out, until I met
A water snake named Clyde,
Who pulled me to some cannibals
Who planned to have me fried.
But an eagle came and swooped me up
And through the air we flied,
But he dropped me in a boiling lake
A thousand miles wide.
And you'll never guess what I did then--
I DIED.

Edward Judorne
02-10-08, 11:12 PM
I used to listen to poetry, now I write it. My mom actually once got a poem I wrote published in a newsletter, An aspergergers syndrome newsletter, but a newsletter, nonetheless. I'll post it up here next time I get the chance.

Sorry that took so long. I had a hard time finding it. Because of this, I also found something else worth reading. The poem I had published in the Aspergers Syndrome newsletter is just below here. It is called "If everyone was like me" and I wrote it when I was 14. O_o



If everyone was like me
Then they all would see
I do not deserve
To be picked on.
Oh the nerve.

They would see I am nice
Through and through and through
Though I have my faults
My heart is like new

They would see I am kind
to everything I see
For I am smart
I am not dumb
That is what they'd see

They would see I am smart
I am brighter than the sun
My brain does not fit in my head
Out my ear it comes

They would see creativity
And originality too
They would see a nintendo freak
If they took a peek or two.

They would see a little boy
Bothered by everyone
Or so it seems to him
Though he does know how to have fun.

They would see a poet
The kind you wouldn't believe
They would see a person who likes penguins
in a way you cannot concieve.

If everyone was like me
Then they all would see
Just about everything
That makes me, me.

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I also like to write song lyrics sometimes, but I can't write melodies for the life of me, which leads me to the bonus I promised. One day, 5 years later, I decided to show off my creative genious to some friends of mine. I asked them what I should write about and one of them jokingly said "Purple Elephants".

Now, I was never one to back away from a challenge, plus I felt like throwing the joke back at them, so in 45 minutes I wrote what was probably the craziest thing ever to be transferred from my head to the paper. Lyrics to a song I wrote called "Purple Elephants Everywhere." (To this day, it still has no melody.)

Purple elephants everywhere
Purple as a grape
Purple elephants here and there
And a rainbow colored ape.
Elephants with tusks so strong
Trunks so long as well
Yet somehow and in some way
The elephants now come in purple

Refrain:
Purple, purple elephants
With trunks of violet blue
Once you see these elephants
You'll think you're seeing things too.

Though you know of purple flowers
With stems the color green
In order to believe in them
Purple elephants must be seen
They have all the power
Normal elephants do
And once you see a purple elephant
Nothing will seem new

To Refrain

I am now in the loony bin
Because of what I've seen
Not only purple elephants
But a dog of green
I'm sure I saw those elephants
At the break of dusk.
If you see one yourself
Get me it's neon purple tusk.

To Refrain

(probably a guitar solo section here)

I am now wondering
Whether what I saw was real
I started muttering to myself
I felt as cold as steel
Suddenly I felt a rumbling
And heard a screechy shout
And I am forever thankful
'Cause those purple elephants busted me out

To Refrain