Eyanie Indarrion

[Eyanie]

Name:Eyanie Indarrion
Age:25
Race:human
Hair Color: Auburn to chestnut, depending on the lighting available
Eye Color: They tend to go from green, to gold, depending on her mood, but usually just hazel
Height: 5'6"
Weight:125lbs
*Occupation: Wanderer

*Personality: Eyanie is not a very trusting soul, in fact, she finds there are very few folk of any race who can be trusted for any substantial length of time. She tends to stay in the shadows and observe before interacting. She learns more that way, and gathers information that could be useful in the future. For a price she'll tell you what she knows.

Appearance: When you first look at Eyanie, you would think she is rather helpless. Tall and wiry, she may even come across as clumsy. Until you see her move. She is stealthy, with long sinewy limbs that carry her form across rooms with an odd sort of grace. Her hair, always braided, falls thickly to her waist, and red highlights peek among the dark brown.

History: Orphaned at a young age, this woman grew up on the streets. Stealing to eat, and eventually other more lucrative, and not so very moral ventures, have jaded her view upon the world.


Skills: Fire-fuel-less flame sustainable for a few minutes, long enough to catch flammable objects on fire, causing moderate burns to skin and clothes. They will not harm the wielder.


Steele Dagger- She is a bit below average in it's use since she recently began learning to use it in defense against would be Thieves.


Equipment: A dagger of steele.

*Familiars: None

*Note that these fields are optional, and you may be approved without them.

[Zook Murnig]

You say she can start a fire with her magic. Is that the only magical ability she has, or is that part of a larger range of fiery abilities?

And I need more description on her other abilities. Is she quicker on her feet than the average human? Is she more skilled with the knife than a common soldier or thug?

Finally, your knife can be made of steel or a lesser material.

[Eyanie]

Thank you, I will fix that.

[Eyanie]

It is fixed. Please let me know if there is anything else required?

[Zook Murnig]

The fast-footedness is fine. However, I do still need you to clarify your magic and your knife abilities.

How is she at knife fighting? Is she like a common thief, who could maybe make it through a person's defenses? Or is she more like a soldier, who is trained (either formally or on her own) to use the blade? Or is she just a regular girl who defends herself with a knife when necessary? To each of those there is a designation you could assign, to make it less wordy. In order of the references, they are average, above average, and below average. I'll allow her to be up to above average if that's what you'd like to be her skill level with the knife.

Is creating a small fire the only thing she can do with magic? How small of a fire? Can she sustain the flame nearby without fuel? These are the sorts of details I need.

[Eyanie]

I changed it, and took out a few things, I hope that this is acceptable?

[Zook Murnig]

Your knife skill is fine, but the fire magic needs toning down a little. I'm guessing that the intent is for her to be able to make a campfire with her magic, but as is the potential for abuse (creating a ball of fire and just floating it there for hours, keeping opponents at bay) is too high. So, I'll ask you to tone the fire magic down to a fuel-less flame sustainable for a few minutes, but capable of catching on flammable materials and causing moderate burns on flesh. Your own flames would not cause you any damage when in the fuel-less state, however.

[Eyanie]

I hope that is better.

[Zook Murnig]

Thank you for your patience. And here is your reward: By the powers vested in me by the administrators of Althanas, you are hereby approved.