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Fallen Emanuel
02-01-08, 04:36 AM
Name: Emany-eru

Age: Died as a 16 year old. Dead for 2 years

Race: Undead

Height: 5'6''

Weaight: 0 Kg

Occupation: Reaper

Familiars: His only friend Oob-eru.

Ambitions: To achieve heaven.

Personality: Emany-eru is both confused and confusing. All of the events which occurred since his creation after death just don't make sense to him or anyone else. He is a pushover usually, but he is still respected by most people. His mood can change really quickly one minute he can me shouting with joy the other he can be crying all the fluid out of him.

Appearence: Emany-eru has deep black hair which is cut unevenly as if it were just randomly chopped up. His eyes are just as dark as his hair, blocking one of the eyes is a round childish mask in the shape of a spirit flame. Emany-eru carries a whide grin pn this face which is almost frightening. He wears a black and white triped suit coat and a black bow tye around his neck neckand 7 black bunnons on his white shirt. His legs are covered by black drainpipe jeans which can barely be seen as the bottom half of his body is half faded.

Personality: Frightening

Weapons(and special equipment):
1.Bladed Umbrella- a weapon with devastating potentian which can either cut in meelee or if spun at high frequency can shoot blades. The umbrella carries a giant needle on it's end which can be used for stabbing, Emany-eru can wish it to shoot out of the umbrella as well, but if he would have to then buy other giant needles as they don't regenerate. The Umbrella also has small throwing knifes all around the outer circular area of the umbrella, which Emany-eru uses by either hanging it by the handle and slashing with it using a pendulum motion, holding it up and spinning it next to the enemy or just simple jabbing. Also if he wilt it the can shoot the knifes from either in a radius or just one at a time. If these run out they can be bought again.

2.Ghost mask- the this mask fully covers Emany-eru's face he can blend into his surroundings for 30 seconds. Then he would have to wait for one minute until he can use it again.Emany-eru is the only one who can use this mask. The effect of this item is not to it's full potential as Emany-eru is only a "newbie" ghost.

3.Unicicle- This is just Emany-eru's way of getting around, as he hasn't learned how to fly yet.

4.Black Buttons- If one of the 7 buttons is removed from the shirt Emany-eru explodes, after this a white button aperas. If all the buttons turn white Emany-eru fades into outer darkness. There is no way of retrieving the buttons, however, Emany-ru is the only one who can remove them. If Emany-eru uses the buttons he explodes in a 5-10 feet radius and a small amount of damage (can be improved), and then comes back to life (of course still in his ghost/dead state), although he will only have some more buttons remaining. If all black buttons are gone he is sent to "outer darkness", which is a place where souls wallow in dark for all eternity and Emany-eru becomes no more, there is no way he can return.

Specrial skills:


High jump. (1.5x higher than average adult human)- the reason he can jump higher than the average human is because he's weightless, although he still struggles with this as he is not used to his new body.


Background: Emany-eru, died 2 years ago at a terrible accident at his highschool prom night. He doesn't remember his real name his family or even where he came from. In the half day of the half year of his death birth he arived at the spirit world where he was to be judged for his deeds in his previous life. His judgement was delayed, he was an extreme case of being half good anf half bad and had nowhere to go.

A man named Sary-eru-Jisan took him into his house where he was trained to one day go back to live among the humans so he could be judged once more. After half a year and half a month, Emany-eru was sent back to the human world, along with his umbrella, unicicle and his spirit friend Oob-eru who didn't yet have a form for not believing in this existence of his.

As they arrived they realised that people weren't too fond to see them so they built their own underground "home" and awaited for an explenation on what they were to do from now on. Half a week after constructing the hideout they reseived a letter from above.

The infidels. You must anialate them.


The edited parts will be written in bold.

Zook Murnig
02-01-08, 08:50 AM
I can't allow you to become completely invisible at this stage, whether it's on your own or from an item you're starting with. I will allow a limited invisibility, such as blending into shadows or a chameleon-like camouflage, so long as it is limited in duration.

I'll need more information on the umbrella, like what it's made from and what the blade and needles are made from. Metal materials are allowed to be steel or weaker at character creation. You would also do well to have a weapon-based skill in the umbrella. I'll allow up to above average skill with the weapon.

The buttons need more information. Does Emany explode, or does the button explode? How large is the explosion? If Emany explodes, how does he still exist? And what is "outer darkness"?

How high can he jump with his High Jump ability? I'll allow 1.5x average jumping height of an adult human at maximum.

Finally, I like the unicycle. It's a nice touch.

Fallen Emanuel
02-01-08, 09:16 AM
Edited. And thank you for the compliment on the unicycle



Also I made a crappy quick sketch of how he should look like... if he was a star in the nightmare before Christmas that is :P. Oh and the umbrella has more blades than I drew, there are actually all around the end of the fabric, I just couldn’t be bothered to draw…

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w169/FallenE/gfgfg.jpg.

Zook Murnig
02-01-08, 04:16 PM
For the umbrella, I can't allow the blades to regenerate or return. Not at this stage, anyway. You can get it enchanted to auto-recover the thrown knives either through roleplaying or in the Bazaar.

The mask can only work for Emany. Otherwise, it's too much like a magical item for me to feel comfortable allowing it. This way, it's a combination of the item's qualities, and Emany's. The effects of the mask can be improved at level-up.

The buttons can create a blast of 5-10 feet, causing low levels of damage. This, too, can be improved at level-up.

And you still need to edit in what I suggested before regarding your Abilities. Edit out the Invisibility skill, and edit in the details for High Jump. You might want to put in a proficiency skill for the umbrella, as well, or else it will be assumed that your skill is Below Average with it at best.

Fallen Emanuel
02-01-08, 05:00 PM
I think I'm done now, can you please just make it so the giant needle can return?

Zook Murnig
02-01-08, 05:42 PM
I hate to tell people to remove entire abilities from their profile, but I'll have to ask you to take those two out.

Fear not, however! You can still do those things. It's just unnecessary to include them in the profile, because you could simply describe those combos in your writing.

I cannot allow any of the weapons to automatically return, however. As I said before, you can get the umbrella enchanted for that in the Bazaar once you have some more gold.

Fallen Emanuel
02-02-08, 04:54 AM
Alright... I guess it's all done now... sorry for having such a complicated character sheet. XP

Zook Murnig
02-02-08, 04:58 PM
Indeed, we are done here. And fear not the complications of an approval. That you stuck with it shows your investment in your character, something necessary indeed for proper writing with said personage.

By the powers vested in me by the administrators of Althanas, you are hereby approved.