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Logan
03-26-06, 10:48 PM
Full Name: Logan McCloud
Age: 24
Race: Human

History:
With time, Logan's name began to become household. Many knew him, and a far greater number, loved him. His spirit and love for all things had won him the hearts of the masses. Few hated him, but those that did, despised him greatly. With noteriaty came an insane amount of responsibility. He owed much to those he cared about. One of those was an innkeeper whose son he'd already rescued from the demon, Phliantross.

In order to fulfill his responsibility to the man, Logan set out to find Phliantross and destroy him, once and for all. It took him just a few days to make it all the way to his destination. After a short travel within Haida, Logan found himself staring at a temple erected to worship the very demon he sought to slay. The irony was as cut and dry as it comes.

A short, but fierce mental battle ensued, as Phliantross dominated Logan's mind from the get-go. Within mere minutes, Logan had been knocked unconscious not once, but twice. The second time, he had a dream or vision, where he saw a symbol and heard a voice. Upon awakening, Logan had the markings of the symbol etched into his forehead. With a quick flurry of moments, Logan had successfully beaten the demon.

Logan didn't know what these markings were or if they even meant anything, but he paid them no mind as he ventured back from Haida. Upon his return to Corone and the inn he usually embraced as a home, Logan received a letter from the leader of the Bandit Brotherhood, Gild Sorrain to meet him. Needing no further explanation Logan set off to Concordia and the place where the great Yari Rafanas was felled.

After a short exchange of words, Gild extended a hand to Logan and Logan accepted the invitation graciously. Logan was now a full-fledged member of the Bandit Brotherhood, and it was evident that he and Gild would form a good friendship and bond from this time as well. The successes of Logan were masked, though, but the foreboding thought of danger. He had set out to a mountain he'd caught wind of once before. A place of great danger...


Abilities:
Extreme focus: He can focus more than most. To the point he can detect the slightest movements(like a tracker or hunter), and sort out convos in a crowded room. In this focused mode, little pain can be felt and he's slightly faster than normal. - Can be broken by a master of any ability(ie: a master of sorcery or stealth). Added: Can be broken by someone with a moderately mastered ability(slightly less than mastery).
Telepathic Link: Allows Logan to hear thoughts of others when directed towards him. He can hear these thoughts more clearly and at an increased amount when combined with Extreme Focus. Usable as long as he can concentrate on the person he wants to hear.
Mind Push: Causes a push outward from Logan in a radius of 10 ft and at the force of Logan himself. Usable once every two days. Update: Extended area of 50 ft and at the force of three Logan's. Now usable once for every ten posts.
Mental Block: Creates an invisible barrier with a radius of 10ft around Logan that only physical attacks and non-physical attacks above Logan's level can penetrate(ie: spells cannot penetrate). Can be sustained for as long as Logan remains focused mentally on the block.
Telepathic Thoughts: An extension of the previous ability, Telepathic Link. With a very small amount of concentration, Logan can project his thoughts audibly into an area with radius of 50 feet surrounding him.

Weaponry: ”The Silence Blades” - Dual shortswords
Metal of swords: Prevalida
Unknown markings(a crest of powers unknown)

Armor: Just the clothes on his back. Basically, a trenchcoat, a pair of black pants, a white t-shirt, and black combat boots.

Appearance: His armor is almost always worn. He's not bulky, but muscular. His medium-length hair is no longer tied back. It is let down to conceal with mark he'd received from a battle with a demon. The mark has been said to house some special power, but Logan has yet to figure out how to unlock this power.

Redeemer
03-27-06, 05:46 AM
Alright, I have to say that mental block needs a limitation. Please tell me some spells or abilities can break it, or make him lose focus. I'm worried you'll be able to hold it for a long time.

Also, for extreme focus, could you note that someone with, like Extreme stealth could evade your notice, atleast for a while.

Logan
03-27-06, 12:57 PM
Edited. Note on the mental block that it says it only blocks non-physical attacks of his level or lower. In other words, level 0's and level 1's can't penetrate it. And it can be broken by distraction, which is why it was explained as "broken when he loses focus". Which can happen - look at extreme focus and note the edit.

Hope this meets approval.

Redeemer
03-27-06, 03:05 PM
The extreme focus is just a bit...Well, at level 2, could you atleast have, say an almost master be able to fool it. I know it's like picking at straws, but I just don't like a level 2 being only answerable to a master.

Logan
03-27-06, 03:40 PM
Edited again. At lvl 3 I will remove that blue portion.

Redeemer
03-27-06, 04:00 PM
IT doth be Approv-ed.