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bearattack
02-28-08, 06:23 PM
Name: Sharp Claw

Age: 167

Race: Bear/Human More about this in history

Hair Color: Black with Brown Spots

Eye Color: Brown

Height: 6'9 when standing on hind legs 5'6 when on all fours

Weight: 1432 lbs

Occupation: Mercenary

Appearance: Sharp Claw looks like a giant Kodiak bear. His coat is thick and Black with brown splotches. His fur is unusually soft and silky for a bear. His head is 2 feet with a black nose and his teeth have a yellowish tint to them.

History: There are two stories here the first one begins about 40 years ago.

Human's History-Sylvain was riding his white horse threw a dark forest he was looking for a farmer's daughter who was kidnapped a few days before. Little did he know he was riding into a trap the farmer had set. The farmer was not a farmer but a high level mage. As he rode into a clearing he heard a little kids voice asking for help. He dismounted and walked towards a small shed where the voice was coming from. He slowly unsheathed his shimmering silver longsword and opened the door. When he walked in he was hit by a blast of fire from inside of the shed. The farmer came into view and said "I have great plans for you." He then kicked Sylvain in the head rendering him unconscious

The second history started 100 years before Sylvains last day.

Bear's History-Sharp Claw came bounded into a forest chasing after a rival bear. The rival bear wanted to take over Sharp Claw's territory. As Sharp Claw came into view of the clearing where his rival stopped at. Sharp Claw stood on his hind legs and cocked his head. He then let an ear splitting roar that made the rival look. The rival stood on it's hind legs and walked towards Sharp Claw. Sharp Claw had an advantage of height and power but the rival had speed. The rival sent a quick slash at Sharp Claw making a 4 inch long gash on his chest. Sharp Claw took his chance and swung his powerful paw at his opponents head. As the claw broke the bear's neck a mage walked into the clearing. He wanted to make a new breed of animal and half would be a bear. The mage had yet to decide what to let the other half be. The wizard sent a powerful freezing spell at Sharp Claw freezing him instantly but he was still alive.

Combined History-Sharp Claw slowly opened his eyes revealing a poorly lit room. He slowly rolled over and tried to stand up but found out being frozen has affected his muscles and bones. He also heard an insistent voice in his head that didn't belong. He asked himself Who are you and what are you doing in my head.

The voice answered My name is Sylvain the Silver human and who are you.

Sharp Claw answered My name is Sharp Claw the Giant bear

Sylvain said So I'm in a bear JUST great

Sharp Claw answered "At least you don't have a voice inside your head.

Sharp Claw looked around and said "I can talk."

Sharp Claw slowly stood and felt a constriction on his chest. He looked down and seen a rusted piece of metal. He took his claws and raked them over it. It fell off with a dull thud and he could breath better. He took a deep breath and busted down the rotten wood door. When the light flooded in he was temporarily blinded when he could see he seen a scorched skeleton 10 feet from where he woke up. He then noticed that his fur was soaking wet. He shook his body and his fur was no longer wet just a little bit damp. He walked out of the clearing and towards a river. Once he got there he found out he still retained most bear abilities. After he was full which took a while to fill up his massive frame. He walked to what he thought was his territory but found a city where his territory was.

Skills:

Bare Paw Fishing-He can fish with his bare hands like a regular bear.

Cold Tolerance-With his coat and being frozen for a long time Sharp Claw has a slight cold tolerance.

Hind walking-Sharp Claw can walk on his hind legs for a period of 3 hours or 2 battles.

Night Eye-Sharp Claw's eyes can take in more visual information at night.

Sensitive Smell-Being part bear Sharp Claw has a sensitive nose enabling him to smell slightly further away than a human.

Roar-When Sharp Claw roars it is meant to scare away his enemies and when this doesn't work he attacks them.

Speed-Sharp Claw has about a little bit more than a normal human.

Strength-Sharp Claw has slightly more strength of a human

Equipment: None

Witchblade
02-29-08, 12:38 AM
Please specify how strong and fast he would be compared to an average human, not a bear.

bearattack
02-29-08, 01:50 PM
Is this good and sorry it took me so long to post just got home.

Witchblade
02-29-08, 02:24 PM
His strength is too much, even if he is a bear. I'll allow him to be slightly stronger than the average human, which is around 1.3 times stronger. Same goes for the speed, though you already put in that he's only slightly faster.

bearattack
02-29-08, 02:28 PM
Ok updated to slightly more but would the speed and strength increase whenever he levels?

Witchblade
02-29-08, 02:54 PM
You are Approved!

And yes, you can most certainly increase it when he levels.