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Yeor
03-09-08, 01:59 AM
Name: Limrén Delethir
Age: 20
Race: Human
Hair Color: Strawberry Blonde
Eye Color: Piercing Blue
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 160
Occupation: Traveler, Adventurer, Nomad

Personality:
Limrén Delethir born to a small tribe that is known for breeding great warriors. From a young age he was trained in the craft of combat. He is a very quiet man, who speaks only when he deems it necessary. He has a lot of confidence in himself, although he does not interact with people often. He separates himself from society because he often trusts no one.

Appearance:
A smaller human, Limrén would appear as a handsome man that always has something on his mind. He is quiet and looks as if he just got into a battle. He looks almost as if he would rather not deal with anyone what so ever; he often tries to stay away from any contact with another being. His face cut in several places giving him a look of old age. His hair would have to be his most unique feature it runs slightly past his ears and is an assorted shade of red and blonde. He has two distinct marks on his face; two small “X” tattoos one under each eye.

Clothes:
Not a well dressed man, looks much like a peasent. His cloths are all brown or a dark leather color. He does have one ring that he found while swimming in a lake at the age of twelve, he wears this ring around his neck on a chain he keeps it as a good luck charm.

History:
Limrén Delethir born to a small tribe of nomadic travelers, a tribe that does not believe in blood ties but that everyone in the tribe in united to each other as a family. Never knowing anything about his own father and mother, being taken away from them when he was a small child, he learned from mentors until the age of eight. At age eight he was thrown into many lessons in the art of combat, when he graduated these lessons he was acknowledged as a true warrior and earned his tattoos (Two “X” tattoos under each eye.) Not long after becoming a warrior he was exiled from his tribe for his defiance of his mentors. At age eighteen he had learned that most of his tribe had been killed off, and those who were not slain traveled alone into the depths of the world never to be heard of again. He spent two years looking for someone he could call a companion, for he is very lonely, but he hardly trusts anyone enough to call him or her a friend.

Skills/Abilities:
-Fighting skills(Slightly Below Average): Though he is bred for combat there is still much he can learn.
-Swordplay(Average): Trained from age three to master swordplay, he still has much to learn.
-Agility(Average): Quick in and out of combat.
-Wordplay (Average): A very cunning smart talker, although he hardly has the opportunity to consort with people because he often avoids them. When the time calls for it though he could definitely talk his way out of many situations.
-Marksmanship (Poor): Though he does not use bows, nor own one, he does know how to use one.
-Magic (N/A): Does not use magic and hardly trusts those who do.

Equipment:
-Weapons:
Two steel swords slightly resembling those of a ninja or samurai, though smaller and much lighter. Blades each around 3'5" in length.
Three silver daggers used for throwing, not often used to combat because of their light weight they serve better purpose for throwing and using to cut.
-Armor:
Leather vest, weak defensive value but great for speed, very lightweight armor.
Leather gloves, weak defensive value also, but great for speed, lightweight.
Leather Belt, three slots that hold his silver daggers, lightweight, no defensive value.

Cyrus the virus
03-09-08, 01:55 PM
Throw a 'swordsmanship' skill in there and say he's an average fighter.

And this is nitpicky, but edit in that the swords are made of steel. The daggers can remain as silver, but keep in mind that silver is much softer than steel, and if you try to parry a sword with one of them, it's very unlikely to remain undamaged.

Yeor
03-09-08, 06:26 PM
Alright I changed what you said needed to be changed, along with better descriptions of his weapons.

Cyrus the virus
03-09-08, 06:41 PM
Why did you put 'above average' when I clearly asked you to put his skill as 'average'? I'm going to ask that you respect both the approval process and myself.

Get rid of either 'agility' or 'senses' and lower that swordsmanship skill to average as I originally asked you to.

Also, please do not PM other Realm of Greeting moderators to look at your profile immediately after you edit it. I will get to it as quickly as I can.

Yeor
03-09-08, 06:49 PM
Sorry about me being impatient... Changes made again though thank you

Cyrus the virus
03-09-08, 07:00 PM
That's okay, I'm sorry if I was the same with you.

The good news is, you are approved! Have fun :D