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Alilacia
03-12-08, 10:12 PM
Name: Alilacia Creliswen, her alias is Seridia
Age: 27
Race: Changeling
Hair Color: changes
Eye Color: changes
Height: changes
Weight: changes

Occupation: Assassin in training

Personality: She is very proud of her skills, but this pride occasionally causes her to think herself immortal which leads to very dangerous or stupid decisions.

Appearance: Changes often (normally looks human) but her favorite: A small girl of about fourteen with long blond hair and baby blue eyes, very adorable and innocent named Seridia. While working: A tall young woman of maybe nineteen or twenty with long dark hair pulled back and out of her face, with fierce eyes, ranging in color depending on her mood.

History: She was born to a small clan of Changelings, an ancient creature that has almost been wiped out. They usually try to hide in the background and disguise themselves to blend in quietly with another culture or race. Her father, however, hired himself out as an assassin, one of the best, and trained Alilacia to follow in his footsteps. She learned many types of fighting, with or without weapons, and just left her father to learn more so she can become a master assassin .

Skills: She is alright with a sword and with her Crescant Blades, that her father made just for her and her unique fighting style. She can change appearence at will, very skilled at blending into surroundings and cultures because she can speak languages easily and take on proper accents etc. Changelings can actually change their phisical bodies, but not clothes or objects, so most also have some skill in illusion magic. With effort she can sometimes change the appearence of other people or things around her, but she needs to be in contact with them as this is just an illusion and not really changing the form. Also, Changelings are not immortal but they do live slightly longer and age slower than humans.

Equipment: Twin iron curved blades on wooden handles that run along the outside of her arms from just past her elbows and over her fists, named Crescent Blades. Also, two long daggers hidden away for emergencies.

Familiars: None yet, but she hopes to find one.

Zook Murnig
03-12-08, 11:04 PM
Don't submit a character profile for judging. It says so in the submission page.

On to the approvals process. In changing her appearance, is it just a disguise, or is it camouflage, too? If it's camouflage, I'll need you to set a skill level on it with regards to how well she can hide herself. I also need more information on how much and how easily she can disguise others and her surroundings. Further, I need to know whether changelings are just resilient, and how resilient if so, or if there are specific things that are necessary in order to kill them. If it's the latter, there needs to be a way to temporarily subdue them, else you might be running around getting in fights and never losing cause you're invincible like that. And finally, if she's skilled in a weapon like her history says she is, add a weapon skill. Depending on how powerful her other abilities turn out to be, I'm tentatively saying slightly above average with one or two weapons is the limit at this point.

Make these edits, and separate out the individual abilities, and you're golden.

Alilacia
03-15-08, 12:02 PM
Sorry, I was confused about the judging thing. I edited my character, I hope I fixed everything you wanted me to.

Cyrus the virus
03-18-08, 03:55 PM
Apologies for the wait, Zook has been busy.

Include that she is an 'average' fighter with her weapons.

Limit how many daggers she has to 2. Specify that all of her weapons are made of iron.

She cannot change the appearance of other things for now, and her ability to change her own form should be very limited, say she can change some of her facial features slightly.

Alilacia
04-05-08, 04:18 PM
Is this better? I know I didn't fix everything the way you wanted me to, but the thing about Changlings is that they can change their appearance. If you would still like me to change more I will. I also made her older if that makes it any better.

Cyrus the virus
04-06-08, 12:12 PM
Well, that's alright. You still need to include, specifically, that she is 'average' with her weapons.

Alilacia
04-09-08, 10:54 PM
I hope this works :)

Cyrus the virus
04-10-08, 10:10 PM
Goddamit. "Alright" with her blades!? I said to put average!!!!! Anyway, whatever, that's not much different. Mmbop.

If you have Alilacia changing appearances at will, I will personally kill you. She may change her appearance a great deal if she has a few minutes to do so, but if she only has a few seconds, she may only change her hair color, eye color, distort her face a bit - that sort of thing. Nothing overmuch.

Or else!

Approved :)