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Arty2501
03-31-08, 03:45 PM
(This is my first time doing anything like this so i appologise for any mistakes i make.)

Name: Arturia Celestae Fate

Age: 19

Species: Human, Female

Height: Five foot nine inches

Weight: Seven stone

Familiar: Seven year old (that’s 3 in dragon years) Pygmy Wyvern named Phianos

Colour: Dark musky orange with a peach under belly.

Eye colour: Dark brown

Height: 1 and a half foot with a 2 foot wingspan

Weight: 2 stone

About:
The stars may not mean much to most people but to Arturia just five minutes staring at these small jewels embedded in the dark velvet skies fills her heart with the warmth and hope she has never felt, yet always longed to have. Since a very young age Arturia has been able to imbue object with the elements and use them to defend herself. She discovered these powers the same time she found her familiar. She was 9 and out in the forest near her adopter families home and she was out picking flowers as a gift for her mother when she heard a noise coming from a nearby clearing. Being the brave girl she was she went to see what all the commotion was about. When she arrived she saw a large beast lay there being assaulted by hunters. Just as they were about to launch a spear through the beasts heart she ran in front of them to defend the creature. The only thing she had to defend herself was a small wooden bow but with no arrows but as her emotions built up an arrow of pure ice formed in her right hand. She took the arrow and closed her eyes strung it up and fired it directly at the base of the launcher. When she opened her eyes she saw the entire clearing in front of her covered in glistening ice and the ballista round frozen in mid air when from behind her she heard a voice. “Thank you young one but it is already too late although as thanks and as a sign of my trust in you please take the last of my clutch of eggs the rest were taken and destroyed by those hunters but your not like them I see your heart and ambitions burn with the fire as strong as that of the phoenixes legendary flames so I leave it in your care.” As the beast said its final words its body turned into a ball of light and slowly drifted up into the sky leaving a small warm egg on the floor. Arty took the egg in her arms and said to herself “ I promise you I’ll look after it and thank you for allowing me to find what lay within me.”

Three years passed and she looked after the egg as if it were her only friend in the world, when she was sad she would sit and pour her whole heart and soul out to it, until one day when she was sat there crying with it in her arms the egg shook and hatched. When the dust had settled she was sat there with a small baby Wyvern curled up in her arms. As the years passed they became the closest of friends and did everything together.

Seven years after they first met hear they stand before us not friends but sisters and warriors fighting to protect all they hold dear and to venture out into the open world and meet the true family and friends she has always dreamed of.

About Phianos:
Phianos Artys trusted friend and ally, She may be small but that allows her to dig into places Arty could never reach by herself. Although she cant speek Arty and Phianos comunicate on a deeper level.

Abilities:
Archary: Above average
Swordsmanship: Average
Dagger use: Below average
Ice spreader: a shot that freezes the target and all obects in a 4 meater diameater solid including the ground as to hinder enemy movement, the result may cause minor freeze burns and may render parts of the opponent immobile for short periods of time, Usable once per thread. 15 foot plus range. only fired at innanimate obtects for the full spread effect, If shot at the floor the freeze arc is only 2 meaters in diameater.
Elemental shot: can change or add an element to any arrow or projectile she’s using, Usable 5 times a day.
Heaven punishment: She fires on arrow vertical and as it falls to the ground generates a beam of light that pierces the enemy, Usable once a tread but Arty falls unconscious for several hours afterwards.
Dead eye: Almost guaranteed to hit an enemy with standard attacks.

Minor medics: Treats small wounds and ailments.
Field craft: Crafts arrows and minor pieces of equipment out of the earth’s bounty.

Phianos abilities:
Scout: Phianos flies ahead or above to scan for possible dangers.
Forage: Searches for materials food and other such items.
Claws: Deal minor damage to NPC's


Equipment:

Spirit bow: a bow forged by Arturia her self who poured all of her heart and soul into crafting its very fine form and grace.
Dragons’ knife: A small dagger crafted from the shell of Phianos egg.(Strength equal to that of steel)
Dragonology book: A book given to Arturia by her adopted father to help her raise Phianos healthily.
Short sword: Her real father’s short sword given to her as she set out on her travels.

Cloths/looks:
Long crimson red hair braided into one long pony tail with a white lily in her hair. Pale white skin with a small feather like birth mark on the palm of her right hand she has purple eyes just like those of Phianos.

Arturia wears a white tunic with red highlights with a pair of three quarter length white shorts with red highlights finished off with a pair of brown leather boots that come up to her ankles along with a long green velvet scarf tied softly around her waist or neck.

Personality:
Arturia is very harsh on herself taking all criticisms to hears and dwelling on them for a long period of time, she is shy around new people and never has much to say and the only things she trusts are her bow and Phianos. After what happened to her in her childhood she would throw herself into battle whole heartedly to protect any and all species of dragon.

Phianos personality:
Quircky and mischevious yet always sensetive to others feelings.

Witchblade
03-31-08, 05:48 PM
Well, for your first go at this, it's not too bad. However, there are afew changes I would like to see.

The short sword may be made out of steel, the dragon knife may still be made from the Phianos egg but, it's strength is equal to that of steel.

As for using the weapons, you need to give your character that skill as well.

Swordsmanship
Dagger
Archery

One may be above average, one average and one below average.

Also, I noticed through the skill Scout, that Phianos seems to be with your character. If so you have to list all of its attributes as a familiar like you did for your character.

Make those edits and post in here again letting me know it's done and then I'll look at it again.

Arty2501
03-31-08, 06:18 PM
Ok updated.

Thanks for setting me on the straight and narrow. ^_^

Witchblade
03-31-08, 07:13 PM
Okay, you're thinking a bit too linear with your magic. Instead of having an attack that only freezes the ground, just say something like this:

Using a concentration of ice magic, she can freeze most inanimate objects, including the ground. Against living flesh it may cause slight ice burns and cause the body to slow slightly due to the sudden drop in temperature.

See how it leaves the ability open to do more than just freeze the ground? Try playing around with your magic a bit more, though if you don't want to, that's fine. Just let me know.

Arty2501
03-31-08, 07:33 PM
Any better?

Thanks for the help again it is very much apreciated. ^_^

Witchblade
03-31-08, 07:36 PM
It is better, but 7 meters is too big an area. Bring that down to four and bring the other (aimed at the ground) one down to 2.

Arty2501
03-31-08, 07:48 PM
Okie dokes as good as done. ^_^

Witchblade
03-31-08, 08:11 PM
All right, you are approverized!

Welcome to Althanas. ^^