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aesculus
06-22-06, 08:06 PM
Name: Sakai Muketsu
Age: 17
Race: Human
Hair Color: Silvery-white
Eye Color: Right- Blue, Left- Aqua-green
Height: 5’5”
Weight: 105 lbs
Occupation: Mercenary

Personality: Slightly naïve; slightly depressed but mostly happy-go-lucky; is not extremely sensitive to insults; can be sarcastic when she finds the opportunity; She hates anyone that is a total ditz to her

Appearance: In plain English, Sakai is this short, skinny girl, with slightly (just a tiny itty-bitty bit) over average looks. Depending on what clothing she’s wearing, a tattoo of a black koi fish and white koi fish circling each other in the appearance of a yin-yang sign can be seen on her back. She is mostly seen in a black close fitting sleeveless top and knee-cut pants, light almost cloth-like boots, golves, and a cloak. A scarf is wrapped around her neck so she can cover her face when needed.

History: Sakai seems to be this normal girl who always has this smile on her face. However she only has this playful façade to cover up the sadness she carries on the inside. Most of her life she had grown up never knowing who her parents were only to find that she was ripped away from her biological mother several months after birth, when her father learned she was not his. Later learning that her mother had gone insane and committed suicide, Sakai had started to feel lonely, and secretly became more distant from people even if she was friends with them. As time has started to pass Sakai had met a dying traveling man, having no idea how to save him she did what she could. In the moments before passing on the man had given her twin blades as payment for her attempt to help him, but he made her keep a promise to learn to use them, one that she would eventually keep through her journey. Sakai is unable to stay in one place for too long, since she has a tendency to go wherever the wind blows.

Skills:

Swordplay

Sakai majority of the time will use her twin blades in battle- it is her strongest form of offence and defence, she still would have a lot to learn even after keeping her promise to the dying man. She is able to use basic skills of sword fighting: Slice, cut, stab, jab, blocks.

Occasionally she uses the two daggers sheathed away on either side of her waist next two her swords- unfortunately she does not have precise enough aim to use them for throwing since she would be so used to close contact fighting from using the swords.

Magic

Some part of the time if she has no other alternative she will use the limited (she knows how to use magic just that she's not very good at it.) magic abilities she has with Fire, and Water/Ice.
Fire- Extract it from her own energy to create a spark, or whip it from a source of fire (coal, longs on fire etc.)
Water & Ice: She can only use these ability when she is near any body of water (Lake, river, stream, puddle), like fire she can use water to whip it around at her enemy, or use her breath to freeze the water into shards to send them in the direction she wants them to go.

The scarf she wears around her neck transform into angel wings giving her the ability to fly, but they do not always come out on command since they require a lot of magical ability to make them work (on a good note the scarf makes a nice accessory).

Other

She is notorious for her acrobatic and flexible abilities, and because of this she wears no armor- this is is her greatest weakness since it leaves her vulnerable even with her skill with twin blades. However she has some use when needed to get through a tight squeeze.

Equipment: Twin blades; daggers; a necklace with a silver cross combined with a crescent moon pendant; traveling sack filled with a medical kit, water canteen; A faint blue scarf about 2.5 metres long.

What the Weapons are Made of:
Twin blades & Daggers: Steel


(Sorry, please don't kill me for any grammar or spelling error. Also, I was reading through your comments of other poeples profiles and tried to change up my character's profile since it's from another site I'm on.)

Arawn
06-23-06, 01:45 PM
Don't worry about the grammar; it's passable. ;)

However, I need you to edit the profile a bit.

I would like to see your various skills separated into a clearer format, perhaps with a paragraph spacing between them. I would also much appreciate a more in-depth look at her magical prowess and weapon proficiencies. Exactly what can she do with fire/ice/water according to you? What you consider weak magic may not be a universal definition. Further, I'd like you to state your weapons are made of steel.


Do that and post here again when you're done so we can see about getting you RPing right away.

aesculus
06-23-06, 07:19 PM
I made some more minor changes in the appearance and added more specifics to the skills, also I'm not sure whether a section was needed for what the weapons were made of, but I made one. If you would like me to have it somewhere in the description I can do that.

Arawn
06-23-06, 08:47 PM
It's good, as long as you don't overuse/powergame the ice ability. That'll get your thread scores lowered.

Otherwise, this character is great. The weapon materials didn't need an extra section, but it doesn't matter.


Approved!



(Now get to RPing. :p)