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Rain Ishikura
06-23-06, 06:46 PM
Name:Einn Lockheart Mudo
Age: 20
Race: human
Hair Color:Black
Eye Color:Silver
Height:6'
Weight:175 lbs
Occupation:Mercenary

Personality:Einn is normally level headed, he tends to be quiet and keeps away from any sign of bad news, something a Mercenary normally wouldn’t do, but when Einn is on call, or even pissed off he completely changes into something else. He becomes hot headed and rude, he will also jump at the chance to get into a fight no matter what the odds.

Appearance: He seems to be a weak straw like young man that wouldn’t know what end to use on a sword. Standing at about six feet with black hair that runs down to about shoulder length you wouldn’t expect him to do much to you. Though his boyish good looks it said to get all the ladies attention at the local taverns. By the looks of his arms he is an outside hard working type of person but it would never be expected to be a heavy lifter. He wears a white leather vest that zips up to a collar that looks like a turtle neck, and blue mythril leg armor that runs down to his shoes that are attached to the armor itself but it somewhat seems like his legs just fill the armor as it is. The most memorable thing on his body is that he has a giant scare on the upper part of his left arm. It’s a mysterious wound to most people but Einn knows were it was from all to well.

History: Einn grew up in a small village in the south. Nothing much really happened there, life was pretty tranquil in its little reality that it had going for it. Einn lived with his family on a hilltop about the village really. The used the village for its market and school house. Einn’s older brother was a professor at the school house and was well liked by the village people. He also did other research in the basement at home on some kind of magic. Einn grew up living the life of a farmer’s son, helping his father; nothing like his brother was doing now. No the future for Einn seemed pretty dull then. Though Einn always dreamed about when he was older joining up with a kingdoms army or something like that, like his grandfather, who had passed away last winter. Einn made his family keep the armor and swords, his grandfather had two swords, “The Ebony”, and a bastard sword meant as a back up in case something were to happen to “The Ebony”. One night while he was getting ready for bed he was marveling at the silver knife his grandfather had given him for his thirteenth birthday when a loud bang noise had come from the basement. Einn thought it was just something his brother was working on, and went to sleep. But when he woke up Einn was in the middle of a burning village. Covered in blood, he was confused, looking up towards his house, he was gone, all that was left was rubble, something had happened. He then ran towards the destroyed house when out of no were his brother had hit him in the gut with the hilt of a sword. It was “The Ebony” Einn didn’t understand what had happened. When he came to again it was about mid day the next morning. Everyone, was dead, brutally ripped apart by a powerful blade, and something else. A monster Einn thought, maybe what his brother was working on, as he walked through the streets on his way home he saw something writing on the wall. It said; “To Einn, Brother I have now know what it feels like to play god… so follow me if you want to… But there would be no turning back, I realized a monster on this land and you can either join myself in safety or save be hunter down… Its all up to you…” As he read he looked through the window, his brother was hanging from a rope by the neck, he had hung himself.

About five years later in the same land a young man walked into a local bar, the town was rebuild but the monster was still around. The young man sat at the counter and asked the bar keep about a job that had to deal with that monster. Everyone in the tavern just stared at him as he took the paper from the bar keep. “Alright I’ll take it…” He said as he placed money down for the drink and walked out of the tavern, everyone began to laugh at him. But then the next night that same man came in holding something in his left hand. He then threw it on the counter and asked for his reward. It was the head or the monster. The bars keep looking in amazement seeing the young man only had a gash on his left arm. He asked for the mans name. “My name… is Einn Mudo…”


Skills:

Stealth: The ability to become invisible to the naked eye. This ability bends light around the user so that it appears that he is not seen. But this takes alot of concentration and would only be used once a day since it takes so much out of the user to do.

Crimson Blade:Releases a powerful dark aura shock wave that paralyzes the enemy upon its touch, enemies caught in the center of this orb of dark aura are said to be torn apart limb by limb. This skill take out a lot of stamina from the user and is truly meant to be a last resort skill, there for this skill should only be used if used at all once a day.

Blazing Sword:With the use of gathered energy from the users body and mind, though some elemental energy can be applied like ice/water, fire, wind/thunder; due to the name of this skill most would normally guess that this user is using a fire based energy. User takes sword in one hand and gathers energy in the other, once enough energy is gathered the user submits the gathered energy into the sword, allowing the blade of the sword to be surrounded in a strong aura of that element of energy used. This skill is a fire based and can be used up to two times a day. Once used the user will not have the strength to gather energy (after second used).

Healing arts: Power to heal small cuts and wounds, not likely to use much due to its weakness. Can heal some deep cuts but mostly just small knife wounds or a graze of a sword. Mostly though this magic is normally used on himself but can be applied to others when needed. He can normally use this art twice a day, but becomes rather tired after the second time of use.


Equipment: Einn carries with him his grandfathers Bastard Sword and a bronze hunting knife that was also given to him by his father. He wears blue iron leg arms but no chest armor. He also has with him about two healing potions that may also heal a minor injurey and one elixir that is just to keep him awake.

Cyrus the virus
06-23-06, 06:51 PM
What are these arts he is able to do, to break defense and such? Are they abilities, or swordplay techniques, or what? What, exactly, can he do?

Healing arts needs a limitation on how many times it can be used in a day.

A silver knife isn't something I'll approve upon registration. It can be sold for quite a bit. So please remove that or change it to something like steel, iron or bronze.

Mythril is too strong a material for any of your equipment. All equipment needs to be of steel strength or weaker.

How many healing potions/elixirs does he have, and how potent are they?

Rain Ishikura
06-23-06, 07:59 PM
Alright I believe I have fixed all I needed to fix, sorry about that I haven't done something this in-depth in a while. Sorry...

Cyrus the virus
06-23-06, 08:07 PM
What are you apologizing for, kook? :p

Sorry I wasn't really clear about sword techniques earlier. Really, the only stuff you need to list are magical type abilities, like if your sword can be powered up, or if your character has the ability to fire a beam from his blade. That sort of thing. As it is, your skills are more like battle manuevres than actual skills, you know what I mean?

So those techniques don't need to be listed, since running at your opponent and slashing downward at them isn't considered a special move, it's something your character can do naturally, I guess.

Everything else is good, as long as you remember to take a healing potion out of your inventory after he drinks it. If you need any help, you can PM me ;)

Rain Ishikura
06-23-06, 10:37 PM
Alright lets give this one more try... how does it look now?

Cyrus the virus
06-24-06, 05:38 AM
It looks damn sexy!

Crimson Blade seems strong, especially the limb from limb part, but since people can decide whether that happens to them or not, I'll allow it. Yeeeah!

So it looks like, could it be? You're approved!

Go kill some goblins now, or something :p Good job.