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BlackAndBlueEyes
06-02-08, 09:52 PM
I better post the link now before I forget.

Zeno Evil (http://www.drunkduck.com/Zeno_Evil/), my upstart webcomic.

There's only two strips right now, and the reason I chose to go with the "kindergarten art class" crayon on paper art style is because that's all I'm capable of doing.








i'll take requests for commissions using that art style if anyone likes...lol

Godhand
06-02-08, 09:58 PM
In b4 John Solomon.

Calx Vir
06-02-08, 11:16 PM
LOL FREE SHARPENER. I liked that.

I look forward to reading more. I'm glad you didn't decide to ditch Althanas for something mundane like a job... Making money... Or maybe even sex.

Do it up!

Melancor
06-03-08, 02:38 AM
Yellowie there got owned.

Nice.

A Nony Mouse
06-03-08, 08:03 AM
not bad/10

Arsène
06-03-08, 08:21 AM
I'll be honest. You seem to have fallen into a classic trap that a lot of webcomics do. You consider violence a punchline and have relied on it for the first two strips. While it can be funny, it shouldn't be the running gag in your comic because it will grow old fast. Random acts of murder can be amusing, just not all the damn time.

More importantly, you need to have all your dialog legible. It's incredibly detracting to a webcomic to not be able to read all the words the first time through.

Other than that, it's pretty good. The crayon style isn't seen much.