Fenem Respice

[Fenem Respice]

Name: Fenem Respice
Age: 400 years (looking to be in his late teens)
Race: Lycanthrope (of the Kinerhign line)
Hair Color: white
Eye Color: electric blue
Height: 6 feet (7 feet in wolf form)
Weight: 150 lbs (240 in wolf form)
*Occupation: wanderer/slayer

*Personality: Normally a lone warrior wandering the world in search for meaning. After four hundred years, and a little known cue against his race, Fenem is in a never ending quest for revenge against the vampire nation. Occasional, he will take time to deal his justice and help the weak or downtrodden. Though quite, he is prone to impart wisdom, or share his thoughts with anyone who would care to listed. It is one of the finer things in life to have company.

Appearance: Normally dawning a black long coat, Hakuma (Baggy pants), and a dark shirt, he will occasionally dawn his Gothic armor in battle with a foe. The shoulders of the armor just out in sharp angle to provide an extra weapon he can use to impale people.

History: In CL 1401 This werewolf of the Kinerhign line was born into servitude. The vampire rave had werewolves to serve as daylight guards and servants. The year of CL 1451 was when it all changed. The Servants at the Castle of Barron Von Strobin revolted. Fenem’s parents gave him the family sword, which he later hid for fear of it corrupting him, and helped him to escape the castle. In running away, Fenem say the execution of his family, along with many others that he new. However, this uprising gave way to massive revolts in the vampire hierarchy. The next ten years would be filled with running, fighting, and anything else that would keep him alive.

The Lycanthrope race was dealt an ugly blow by the Round Up, as it was later called. Many dies, and lines were lost, but Fenem survived to harbor his anger and thoughts of vengeance. An internal conflict rages day by day, let his revenge overwhelm and consume, or forget the past and move forward.

In an effort to blot out his past, he retreated to the mountains and trained with Master Hiteroshi. When the master felt there was nothing more Fenem could learn, he set the werewolf on his journey. Fenem’s time of training gave him skills beyond his imagination, but the want for revenge was still there, despite his masters teachings.

Skills: He can manipulate probability, using chi energy, and make the explosive orbs fly though the air with great speed. Fenem can lift items of twenty pounds or less takes a large amount concentration, making it hard for him to do other things while controlling the object. If his concentration is broken, the item is dropped. Due to his Lycanthropy, his speed 1.5 times that of a human’s. Large amounts of white blood cells, coupled with rapid cell regeneration allows him to quickly heal minor wounds, usually within an hour or two. Medium wounds can be healed within a few days and major wounds within a week. Slight precognitions in battle is due to years of training. Reading his enemies muscle movement, he can asses their potential attacks.

Equipment: Fenem has a bag of 7 explosive orbs which he keeps on the inside of his long coat. The orbs can penetrate the skin and cause a whole about six inches in diameter. He also possesses a sixty inch Odachi (Long Katana) which is made of folded steel. The blade is forty five inches long, with the handle being the remainder of the length. Around his neck is a silver cross, a constant reminder of what happened to his family.

*Familiars: none at the moment, but he is looking.

[Witchblade]

The Odachi can only be made of Steel at this point in time. I need you to list how many explosive orbs he has and how powerful they are.

Also, you may pick either his strength OR his speed to be 1.5x the average human. Not both. This of course--along with other skills and abilities--can be changed when you level up.

Please further explain his skills with Telekinesis, Healing and Precognition. i.e. Telekinesis - can lift items with his mind, up to 20 lbs, but requires intense amounts of concentration and a loss of concentration will drop the item.

Make those changes and post here again saying 'edited' and I'll take another look at it.

[Fenem Respice]

I've edited the post.

Name: Fenem Respice
Age: 400 years (looking to be in his late teens)
Race: Lycanthrope (of the Kinerhign line)
Hair Color: white
Eye Color: electric blue
Height: 6 feet (7 feet in wolf form)
Weight: 150 lbs (240 in wolf form)
*Occupation: wanderer/slayer

*Personality: Normally a lone warrior wandering the world in search for meaning. After four hundred years, and a little known cue against his race, Fenem is in a never ending quest for revenge against the vampire nation. Occasional, he will take time to deal his justice and help the weak or downtrodden. Though quite, he is prone to impart wisdom, or share his thoughts with anyone who would care to listed. It is one of the finer things in life to have company.

Appearance: Normally dawning a black long coat, Hakuma (Baggy pants), and a dark shirt, he will occasionally dawn his Gothic armor in battle with a foe. The shoulders of the armor just out in sharp angle to provide an extra weapon he can use to impale people.

History: In CL 1401 This werewolf of the Kinerhign line was born into servitude. The vampire rave had werewolves to serve as daylight guards and servants. The year of CL 1451 was when it all changed. The Servants at the Castle of Barron Von Strobin revolted. Fenem’s parents gave him the family sword, which he later hid for fear of it corrupting him, and helped him to escape the castle. In running away, Fenem say the execution of his family, along with many others that he new. However, this uprising gave way to massive revolts in the vampire hierarchy. The next ten years would be filled with running, fighting, and anything else that would keep him alive.

The Lycanthrope race was dealt an ugly blow by the Round Up, as it was later called. Many dies, and lines were lost, but Fenem survived to harbor his anger and thoughts of vengeance. An internal conflict rages day by day, let his revenge overwhelm and consume, or forget the past and move forward.

In an effort to blot out his past, he retreated to the mountains and trained with Master Hiteroshi. When the master felt there was nothing more Fenem could learn, he set the werewolf on his journey. Fenem’s time of training gave him skills beyond his imagination, but the want for revenge was still there, despite his masters teachings.

Skills: He can manipulate probability, using chi energy, and make the explosive orbs fly though the air with great speed. Fenem can lift items of twenty pounds or less takes a large amount concentration, making it hard for him to do other things while controlling the object. If his concentration is broken, the item is dropped. Due to his Lycanthropy, his speed 1.5 times that of a human’s. Large amounts of white blood cells, coupled with rapid cell regeneration allows him to quickly heal minor wounds, usually within an hour or two. Medium wounds can be healed within a few days and major wounds within a week. Slight precognitions in battle is due to years of training. Reading his enemies muscle movement, he can asses their potential attacks.

Equipment: Fenem has a bag of 7 explosive orbs which he keeps on the inside of his long coat. The orbs can penetrate the skin and cause a whole about six inches in diameter. He also possesses a sixty inch Odachi (Long Katana) which is made of folded steel. The blade is forty five inches long, with the handle being the remainder of the length. Around his neck is a silver cross, a constant reminder of what happened to his family.

*Familiars: none at the moment, but he is looking.
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[Witchblade]

When I said to post again saying 'edited' I just meant in the same thread, not for you to make a new one. ^^;

Can he only manipulate probability to make the orbs propel themselves through the air? Also, at this level he can heal minor wounds within an hour, medium wounds within a few days and major wounds in around a week.

He can have 7 of those exploding orbs, make sure to keep track of them. And make sure not to abuse his slight precognition on battle.

Make those changes and I'll take another look at it.

[Fenem Respice]

Well the slight precognition is no more than what I experience when sparing. The Telekinesis is something that takes affect after the momentum of him throwing it. And how do I specify his healing ability, it just sounds odd to write it in how you’ve suggested, It doesn’t seem to go with the voice that I wrote in, that’s all.

*Edited *

Name: Fenem Respice
Age: 400 years (looking to be in his late teens)
Race: Lycanthrope (of the Kinerhign line)
Hair Color: white
Eye Color: electric blue
Height: 6 feet (7 feet in wolf form)
Weight: 150 lbs (240 in wolf form)
*Occupation: wanderer/slayer

*Personality: Normally a lone warrior wandering the world in search for meaning. After four hundred years, and a little known cue against his race, Fenem is in a never ending quest for revenge against the vampire nation. Occasional, he will take time to deal his justice and help the weak or downtrodden. Though quite, he is prone to impart wisdom, or share his thoughts with anyone who would care to listed. It is one of the finer things in life to have company.

Appearance: Normally dawning a black long coat, Hakuma (Baggy pants), and a dark shirt, he will occasionally dawn his Gothic armor in battle with a foe. The shoulders of the armor just out in sharp angle to provide an extra weapon he can use to impale people.

History: In CP 1401 This werewolf of the Kinerhign line was born into servitude. The vampire rave had werewolves to serve as daylight guards and servants. The year of CP 1451 was when it all changed. The Servants at the Castle of Barron Von Strobin revolted. Fenem’s parents gave him the family sword, which he later hid for fear of it corrupting him, and helped him to escape the castle. In running away, Fenem say the execution of his family, along with many others that he new. However, this uprising gave way to massive revolts in the vampire hierarchy. The next ten years would be filled with running, fighting, and anything else that would keep him alive.

The Lycanthrope race was dealt an ugly blow by the Round Up, as it was later called. Many dies, and lines were lost, but Fenem survived to harbor his anger and thoughts of vengeance. An internal conflict rages day by day, let his revenge overwhelm and consume, or forget the past and move forward.

In an effort to blot out his past, he retreated to the mountains and trained with Master Hiteroshi. When the master felt there was nothing more Fenem could learn, he set the werewolf on his journey. Fenem’s time of training gave him skills beyond his imagination, but the want for revenge was still there, despite his masters teachings.

Skills: He can manipulate probability, using chi energy, and make the explosive orbs fly though the air with great speed. Due to his Lycanthropy, his speed 1.5 times that of a human’s. Large amounts of white blood cell, coupled with rapid cell regeneration, allows him to heal quickly. Slight precognitions in battle is due to years of training. Reading his enemies muscle movement, he can asses their potential attacks.

Equipment: Fenem has a bag of 7 explosive orbs which he keeps on the inside of his long coat. The orbs can penetrate the skin and cause a whole about six inches in diameter. He also possesses a sixty inch Odachi (Long Katana) which is made of folded steel. The blade is forty five inches long, with the handle being the remainder of the length. Around his neck is a silver cross, a constant reminder of what happened to his family.

*Familiars: none at the moment, but he is looking.

[Witchblade]

Please edit your original post and then reply to the thread saying 'edited' so that I know it is done.

As for the voice you have used to write the profile, there's not much I can help you out with that, but you need to chage your skills.

'Large amounts of white blood cells, coupled with rapid cell regeneration allows him to quickly heal minor wounds, usually within an hour or two. Medium wounds can be healed within a few days and major wounds within a week.'

For telekinesis, he can lift items of twenty pounts of less right now and it takes a large amount concentration, making it hard for him to do other things while controlling the object. If his concentration is broken, the item is dropped.

[Fenem Respice]

Name: Fenem Respice
Age: 400 years (looking to be in his late teens)
Race: Lycanthrope (of the Kinerhign line)
Hair Color: white
Eye Color: electric blue
Height: 6 feet (7 feet in wolf form)
Weight: 150 lbs (240 in wolf form)
*Occupation: wanderer/slayer

*Personality: Normally a lone warrior wandering the world in search for meaning. After four hundred years, and a little known cue against his race, Fenem is in a never ending quest for revenge against the vampire nation. Occasional, he will take time to deal his justice and help the weak or downtrodden. Though quite, he is prone to impart wisdom, or share his thoughts with anyone who would care to listed. It is one of the finer things in life to have company.

Appearance: Normally dawning a black long coat, Hakuma (Baggy pants), and a dark shirt, he will occasionally dawn his Gothic armor in battle with a foe. The shoulders of the armor just out in sharp angle to provide an extra weapon he can use to impale people.

History: In CL 1401 This werewolf of the Kinerhign line was born into servitude. The vampire rave had werewolves to serve as daylight guards and servants. The year of CL 1451 was when it all changed. The Servants at the Castle of Barron Von Strobin revolted. Fenem’s parents gave him the family sword, which he later hid for fear of it corrupting him, and helped him to escape the castle. In running away, Fenem say the execution of his family, along with many others that he new. However, this uprising gave way to massive revolts in the vampire hierarchy. The next ten years would be filled with running, fighting, and anything else that would keep him alive.

The Lycanthrope race was dealt an ugly blow by the Round Up, as it was later called. Many dies, and lines were lost, but Fenem survived to harbor his anger and thoughts of vengeance. An internal conflict rages day by day, let his revenge overwhelm and consume, or forget the past and move forward.

In an effort to blot out his past, he retreated to the mountains and trained with Master Hiteroshi. When the master felt there was nothing more Fenem could learn, he set the werewolf on his journey. Fenem’s time of training gave him skills beyond his imagination, but the want for revenge was still there, despite his masters teachings.

Skills: He can manipulate probability, using chi energy, and make the explosive orbs fly though the air with great speed. Fenem can lift items of twenty pounds or less takes a large amount concentration, making it hard for him to do other things while controlling the object. If his concentration is broken, the item is dropped. Due to his Lycanthropy, his speed 1.5 times that of a human’s. Large amounts of white blood cells, coupled with rapid cell regeneration allows him to quickly heal minor wounds, usually within an hour or two. Medium wounds can be healed within a few days and major wounds within a week. Slight precognitions in battle is due to years of training. Reading his enemies muscle movement, he can asses their potential attacks.

Equipment: Fenem has a bag of 7 explosive orbs which he keeps on the inside of his long coat. The orbs can penetrate the skin and cause a whole about six inches in diameter. He also possesses a sixty inch Odachi (Long Katana) which is made of folded steel. The blade is forty five inches long, with the handle being the remainder of the length. Around his neck is a silver cross, a constant reminder of what happened to his family.

*Familiars: none at the moment, but he is looking.

[Fenem Respice]

I edited it, oh, and Kamalot is an awsome band.

[Witchblade]

Yes, yes they are. ;) And made of even more win when you see them live.

You are Approverized!