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Trizeran
07-11-08, 09:27 PM
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Name: Fribix Greldum
Age: 23
Race: Elven
Height: 5'3
Weight: 124 lbs.
Occupation: Takes jobs that puts his skills to good use.


Personality: Fribix is easy to talk to, but it is difficult to get any personal information from him. He chooses carefully who he associates with and does so by close analysis. He is known to start trouble, but nothing big, like brawls. He has a kind heart and will help people, even if it means opposing the law, but this is a rarity.

Appeaarance: Fribix is a pretty handsome guy. He has a clean, shaven face and keeps himself well groomed. His hair is long but managable. He has a scar across his nose, made by the claws of an animal that he never go to see. He can easily persuade females to help him in any of his schemes if needed, but they would soon realize the trouble he causes, once they are in the hands of the law.

History: As a child, Fribix would cause trouble in his little down daily. His parents would punish him, but he was never phased. He would cause continuous trouble, until one night, he burned down the town chapel. He realized he would probably get into the worst kind of trouble so he packed his bags and left for the road. He was soon able to get one outfit he would always have, as to drop his load. He caused trouble in each town he passed through, even though it was only to keep himself alive. He has been numerously attacked by gangs, for they knew they would get a great reward for his capture, but he always escaped using sly moves and quick wits.

Skills: His stealth (ability to enter houses or inns undetected, and move around while making little to no noise) is above average. His pickpocketing is below average level, for he refrain from doing so unless necassary. His agility is above average, and used for quick escapes. His dagger level is below average, as he uses his sword in battle. Thus his swordsmanship is average. His ranged level, which is tested with his chain link, is average level.

Equipment: He carries with him a dagger with a 7in. blade, held in his belt. He aqquired this weapon on the 1st week of his journey away from home. He managed to pickpocket a Royal for this weapon. He also has a samurai sword, which he was able to steal from a weapon shop. The clerk went to look for a false request of Fribix's and he took the sword and ran from the village. The 7ft. chain link in his cloak has an arrow at the end with sharp edges 2 inches from the chain. This item can be used for ranged attacks and climbing houses and buildings.

Familiars: Even though it may not be seen in the towns with Fribix, he is accompanied by a small mink named Zix. Zix is a strange dark blue color. He saved the animal from being mauled by a pack of wolves while in the forset. Zix has been forever loyal and trails either alongside Fribix, on his shoulder, on in his cloak.

http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll17/iFlippy118/ElfFribix.png

~Note: This picture was not made by myself. It is being used only to depict the appearance of my character.

Witchblade
07-12-08, 08:46 AM
Can you please divide up your skills and give them a proper skill level?

Stealth - manages to sneak in and out of place rather easily... etc. Above Average. You've also got lockpicking in there and you need to have a dagger and swordsmanship listing for the weapons you have. At this point in time you can only have skill levels of Above Average, Average and Below Average. Not everything can be Average and Above Average, make sure you even it out.

Make those changes and post here again saying 'edited' and I'll take another look at it.

Trizeran
07-12-08, 12:20 PM
Skill levels added and 1 changed.

Witchblade
07-13-08, 03:34 PM
Approverized!