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Abaddon Thornbreed
08-01-08, 06:23 PM
Abaddon was a fierce warrior that lived for conflict and confrontation, and was a vanguard on the battle field always at the front line always throwing himself further into enemy ranks than most would dare. He towered over his adversaries as a titan, and his collosus strength easily dismantled the common man. Yet his thirst for power was like a gaping void that could never be filled, even in death the man had denied his fate and pushed forward through hell itself like a holy man pushing redemption. He had come to rely on rage to push his strength to the limit, as he meleed through hordes of undead in his one man assault against his own demise. With his own two hands he had managed to claw his way through the void and had awoken back in the realm of the living as though it had been nothing but a dream. But his memories of what happened had been fragmented, and he had returned not as a man but as a shadow of his former self. Once a paladin a force of righteousness now a Hell Knight a pawn of a chaotic being he cannot define. His soul knows only torment, and pain as he exists in a line blurred between life and death as his two halves are in grid lock constantly trying to gain control.

Race; 1/2 Human 1/2 Demon
Age; 230
Height; 8 feet
Weight 500 lbs
Eye Color; Blue
Hair Color; Jet Black

Appearance; A giant of a man Abaddon is built like a professional body builder, and his body is graced with many battle scars. He has long shoulder length black hair and his icey blue eyes carry a mournful look. When he gets angry his eyes erupt in this hazey blurr of eerie blue light.

Abilities.

Uses a Zweihander.

Black Reignment Of Hate
At times he can conjure a unholy black suit of armor that grants him bonuses to strength and gives him the ability to conjure and manipulate blue fire. As he increases in level and power so to will the magnitude and duration of this limit break technique.
When this technique is activated he has the ability to create a fireball, or have his sword erupt in fire, or create an aura of flames. x1.3 strength

Berserk;
An emotional mindset that increases his strength and stamina and his appetite to recieve physical punishment. The more rage he gains the stronger he becomes, the downfall is a loss of sanity that drives him to blindly take massive damage. x1.5 strength runs on a 2 minute timer.

Extreme Physical Strength;
Hes built solid like a tank, but is slow moving.

Equipment
Steel Zweihander/Great Sword

Familiar
His zweihander will sometimes guide him to do his masters bidding.

Witchblade
08-01-08, 07:13 PM
Your Zwei sword made me made of steel, the armour that he conjures may have the strength of Iron and cover his torso, his forearms and his shins and may only stay around for three minutes before disappearing. Can you please list exactly how he can manipulate fire at this point? Also, in Berserk the strength boost can be x1.5 the average strength of a human and in the Black Reignment it can be 1.3x.

Make those changes and post here again so I know they're done and I'll take another look.

Abaddon Thornbreed
08-01-08, 07:24 PM
Ok made the changes, I hope this is looking good.

Witchblade
08-01-08, 07:28 PM
Okay, let's make Berserk last for two minutes in battle, however feel free to push it to it's limits during a quest. The battle limit is just so you don't--even accidentally--abuse it while you're fighting. Make that last change and you should be good to go. ^^

Abaddon Thornbreed
08-01-08, 07:36 PM
So would this mean that it would be used for 1 or 2 posts then the effect is ended in a pc vs pc conflict?

Witchblade
08-01-08, 07:39 PM
Two minutes can sometimes be an eternity in a battle, if you've ever actually done any fighting yourself. We don't give it a set amount of posts, we leave that up to player disgretion, but obviously something like six posts would probably be too many.

Abaddon Thornbreed
08-01-08, 07:43 PM
Which makes sense, im still new to the forum and am just trying to make sense of things. I know how pvp gets, and I really enjoy it I just dont want to get myself into a position where someone will be mad with me which is why I asked.

prolly not the right place to ask this, but where do I start questing and what can I do at lvl 0 besides die a horrible death lol.

Witchblade
08-01-08, 07:56 PM
There is no limit to where you can and can't write as a level zero character. You can definitely check out the Peaceful Promenade in Scara Brae, it's specifically designed for low level characters. If you're interested in battling, there's The Citadel as well as The Pagoda. Just take a look around and if you need other people, throw up a recruitment thread in The Role Player's Corner.

Approverized!