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Glim
07-03-06, 10:06 AM
Name: Glim Finklestein

Race: Gnome

Height/weight: 2'0, 45lbs

Eye Color: Dark Purple

Hair color: Black

Occupation: Rogue

Appearance: Well if you usually look at the ground then you might see him. He is very short. He has black hair, and dark purple eyes. He has fair skin and wears a full black leather armor set. He carries 2 dual stilletos on his side.

Personality: Crazy, Wild, Fun to be around. If you saw him on the old Althanas then you know how crazy he is. But after certain events he has become more serious when it comes to fighting or "jobs".

Weapons: Two dual steel stilletos

Skills: Minor Invisibility: He can become invisible to the untrained eye for up to 15 seconds then know matter where he is, he becomes visible again.

Acrobatics: Nothing crazy, he is just flexible, and can do flips and balance, stuff like that.

Speed: Glim can run faster than normal for up to 10 seconds. He usually combines this with his invis. skill since it only last for a short period of time.

History: Once a Engineer, now a Rogue. After taking on the life of his cousin Fyndergald Weismoon, Glim has become very trained in the art of theivery and rogue like abilities. He is quick with daggers and very silent. He has been training for the last few years but is now ready to begin using his skill. Also he wishes to re-unite with his favorite gnome cousin Fynder!

Mo Jo
07-03-06, 11:37 AM
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Arawn
07-03-06, 12:03 PM
Good format. Edits to make:

- Fifteen seconds is a long time to become invisible. Lower the time or give the skill a weakness. Perhaps anyone looking straight at him will see him fuzzily?

- Define how much faster he is in more detail. 1.5x usual?

- These time limits you have on your skills, specify if they're due to fatigue or whatever. Does he recover after rest and is able to preform them again?

- I would like a more profound history so I know you put some real thought into this character, but it's not mandatory. Your choice there.