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Mad_Hatter
10-27-08, 04:18 PM
Name: Riyah Arie

Age:22

Race: Human

Hair Color:brown

Eye Color: brown

Height: 5'7"

Weight:120lbs

Occupation:Farm Hand

Weapons: Steel Scythe, and Bow and Arrow made of yew wood

Armor: Leather pants

Personality: Riyah is a sweet, if not naive young girl. She is generally nice to everyone, but dont get on her bad side. She has an explosive temper.

Appearance:

She is an average height and has long wavy brown hair and brown eyes. She has a fairly light complexion with a few freckles across her nose. She is attractive. She would probably even be beautiful if not for the fact that she is a tomboy to the extreme and never worries much about her appearance. She has a lean form and fairly defined muscles.

History:

Riyah was born and raised on a small farm in Corone where she lived with her extremely religious parents, brother and two sisters. She had a relatively normal childhood until the age of 18 when she, and her family, began to notice that she could make certain things happen by singing certain songs, or using a certain pitch. Her parents, struggling to make sense of their daughters new "talent", let fear get the better of them and finally disowned her, claiming that they "absolutely refused to have witchcraft in their house!" Failing to convey to her parents that it wasn't something she could control, Riyah reluctantly left her childhood home; determined to find out who she was and where this strange "gift" came from. She found work as a farmhand in a neighboring city and quickly befriended her eccentric employer. He taught her how to use her scythe as a weapon and how to handle a bow and arrow. She enjoyed her time with the old man, but dreamed of seeing the world. So after 4 years being a faithful farm hand she felt she had learned all she could and left the farm in search of her true identity.

Skills:

She can wield a Scythe with above average skill.

Her archery skills are below average at best. She knows how to use her bow and arrow, but is much less than proficient.

She has, on occasion, been able to create a dense fog with her song, but this takes an enormous amount of concentration and is very hard for her to control, therefore it can be used only once per battle.

Witchblade
10-27-08, 04:43 PM
Hiya and welcome to Althanas! I'll be the mod in charge of taking care of your profile and helping you adjust some things about it so it better fits the world of Althanas.

First off, I need you to list armour (if she has any) and weapons, since you mentioned her having skills with weapons though she appears to carry none. As for your skills themselves, I'm going to have you break them up so they're easier to read and understand. Her skills with the scythe and her marksmanship should be separate. Also, one of those may be Above Average and the other Below Average. Then separate this song ability she has and put in more detail so that I can better understand it right now. Remember not to make it too powerful.

Once you're done editing the profile, post in the thread letting me know that it has been done.

Mad_Hatter
10-28-08, 08:07 PM
profile edited! ^^

Witchblade
10-29-08, 08:49 AM
If you would like to add in one more ability with her song magic, you may do so. Otherwise this profile is approved.