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BuzzSaw22
11-04-08, 10:12 PM
Name: Ace (BuzzSaw) Naren
Age: 26
Race: Human
Hair Color: Black with Blue Bangs
Eye Color: Blue
Height: 6 foot 5 inches
Weight: 200 pounds
*Occupation: Mercenary

Personality: Ace "BuzzSaw" Naren is devoted to his training and is always ready for a fight; to make money he sells his skills as a warrior to the highest bidder. When Ace speaks with people he is rude and obnoxious, he dose not like meeting new people and avoids it at all cost! Ace is despised by himself and by his willingness to kill, he never feel no remorse for anyone he kills.

Appearance: Jet black hair; his deep blue bangs are always brushed off to one side covering his right eye; his eyes are a deep inviting shade of blue. He wares blue jeans, the 34” waste sits loosely on his hips, and the 38” legs barley covered his ankles. He wares black size 13 boots and a brown belt around his waste with a buckle that reads “U SUCK”. His shirt starches tight across his wide shoulders, his muscular figure can be clearly seen under the plain black t-shirt. A red dragon scale leather trench coat hangs off of his shoulders to just inches off of the ground, and finally his 2 weapons are held in sheaths hanging from his 2 hips.

History: Three generations back Ace’s family was being hunted for a crime his grate, grate grandfather committed. He had assassinated an Elvin Priest. To escape the prosecution of death, his family made a deal with a clan of mercenaries. The clan would claim to have killed the family, but only if the family agreed to work for the clan, the debt was 1000 jobs be completed, before the family would be free again. To this day Ace is still paying that debt off, counting every job till the day he is free.

Skills: Ace is a regular human with no unearthly talents; he knows no magic spells of any kind. The few talents he dose have are:
Combat training
- Hand to hand (is trained in the basics of lower and higher levels of hand to hand combat eg: Kickboxing and Karate, skill level in both are below average)
- Minor skills with a bow (basic training with bow, his level novice at best)
- Averagely skilled wielder of Elvin Blood Rain Blades

Conditioning (passive abilities, has trained these abilities to make him more adapt at fighting but they are not truly skills, he dose not need focus to use them)
- Quick reflexes (Ace, through his training has become very agile, he can move and react faster and more swiftly then the average human, up to 1.5 times faster reflexes(not actually physically any faster in running or swimming))
- above average lung capacity (intense training has cause ace to have an increased lung capacity, he can hold his breath for longer periods of time, and dose not tire as easy as the average human, ace can run about 1.2 times the distance of a regular human man of his age)
- High pain resistance (after working as a mercenary, Ace built up a high resistance to pain. if he is stabbed or hit ace will be able to fight better with this injury then an average human (depending on where and how badly the injury is of course), better at dealing with physical pain the magic, 1.5 times physical pain resistance / 1.1 times magic pain resistance)

Equipment:
Weapons:
- Two iron Elvin blood rain blades (close range combat weapons)

Armor:
- A steel Chain mail Trench Coat
- Leather Gloves

Items:
- A pendent his grate, grate grand father owned (sentimental value, no special ability know of)
- His "Ork war bible" (a book he purchased, lists many if not all of the different fighting styles Orks know, including other races fighting styles)

Taskmienster
11-04-08, 10:22 PM
In the Combat Training: You need to explain the skills that you have in there, as well as remove the skill with axes/swords/knives/staves, and down the elven blood rain blades skill to average.

Equipment: The swords must be iron or steel, please remove the dragon scale gloves, the chainmail needs to be iron/steel and you need to remove the dragon scale leather as well.

After you make those edits I will be here to help you along with finishing up this approval as fast and well as we can. Thanks for your compliance and welcome to Althanas.

BuzzSaw22
11-05-08, 12:19 AM
I have completed the edits to the specified areas.
I hope my character is now at an acceptable level
And thank you I am glad to be here

p.s would it be acceptable if He wore regular leather gloves

Taskmienster
11-05-08, 01:06 PM
- Hand to hand: The description is fine for this, but it needs to be below average skill.

Conditioning What is conditioning? What does it mean, is it a skill, or a broad category that the following skills fall under. If it is a category please just put a space between it and the previous skill so it's easier to read and understand. Nothing big though. If it isn't a category, please add a description to it.

- Quick reflexes I need a description. Such as, does this skill regard the man's dexterity, like is he agile? Or does he actually move faster? Being able to be more agile, avoiding and being flexible (of a sorts) is different then your overall speed. Whichever it be, it should be at 1.5 times better than that of a normal human.

- Large lung capacity What does this mean? Doesn't get winded, can swim longer?

- High pain resistance You can take more blows, or does things like a fireball spell that hits you doesn't hurt as much? That's what should be written for the description, and you can have a 'low' resistance that is no more than 1.5 times higher than the average human.

- High endurance Not sure what this means either. Explain it please and we can work from there.



That's just what we'll fix right now and we'll work from there, and you can have a pair of leather gloves if you'd like, just not dragonscale. It's just too powerful for a level 0 character.

BuzzSaw22
11-05-08, 03:49 PM
I have finished the requested edits and added the detailed descriptions you wished to see
Is there anything else you would like me to change or add in order to make "Ace" an acceptable character?

Taskmienster
11-05-08, 03:56 PM
- Hand to hand (has below average training...)

That's the last thing and you'll be set to go!

BuzzSaw22
11-05-08, 04:03 PM
- Hand to hand is now below average level, in both his forms of fighting
(I have left it worded that way it was before and just added the "below average skill level" to the end, I hope that is acceptable)

thank you for your help

Taskmienster
11-05-08, 04:10 PM
Yes, that's perfect. Sorry for the long process, but I'm a very picky person at times, haha. Thank you for your compliance and agreeable nature! Scara Brae and the Peaceful Promenade are always great places to start your rping career on Althanas. Scara Brae is a region built and founded for the use of lower level roleplayers, levels 0 and 1. You can find many things to do there of interest. The Introduction forum is also a great way to say hey and meet the community!

If you have any further questions you can feel free to ask any moderator at anytime, we're here to help.

And finally, APPROVED!