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Leonoris
11-15-08, 09:25 PM
Name: Cordan Lirosso
Age: 17
Race: Human
Hair Color: Auburn
Eye Color: Cobalt
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 143 lbs
Occupation: Adventurer
Personality: Very outgoing and friendly, funny, but cautious.
Appearance: Muscular build, fair skin, short hair
History: Born in Haralai Village, he was one of the few people in his village's history to possess magical abilities. He was sent to a magic school, where he graduated and is now an adventuring mage.
Skills: Magic - Elemental skills (fire, water, earth, thunder, ice, wind), healing, scrying, augmentation magic (defensive shields, strength boosters, speed boosters, etc.), able to see and hear what another willing being sees and hears (spell).
Equipment: A single crystal dagger that belonged to his mother, with a fine silver hilt, crystal blade, and sapphire gem in the pommel that matches his eyes.
Familiar: A small monkey, Tek, that has been close to him since childhood. Tek can retrieve things, pick locks, and move mostly unnoticed.

Taskmienster
11-17-08, 06:09 AM
Hi there, and welcome to Althanas. I'm very sorry for the delay, but was shall get on this now and have you rping here in no time!

For your skills with Magic: Please reduce the number of magical abilities you have to only 4 for now, and they need some sort of low starting level descriptions added to them. For example: Fire: Cordan is able to manipulate fire to a small degree, at this level he can only create a small magical fireball the size of a grapefruit, make an already existing flame grow or shrink, and cannot create a natural fire. Though if something catches on fire caused by his fireball he is able to control that slightly.

You should also consider adding a non-magic skill concerning your ability to use the dagger you have listed, otherwise he will be considered completely useless with it in regards to combat. This skill, coupled with the fact that you are going into a more mage based character, should be below-average.

The crystal dagger cannot, ever, be sold. As well as that, you need to set a relative hardness for the crystal (it can be as strong as steel or iron).

Tek should not be used in combat, unless your opponent allows it, as well as needs to have 'average' skill with lock picking when he has the supplies to do so. ((Which you could list a lock picking set in your equipment that you carry for him to use as well)).