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Aryna
11-30-08, 11:50 AM
(I couldn't figure out how to change the title of my post so i re-posted. you can delete the other one.)
Name: Adoruk (Unknown)
Age: 112
Race: Half demon Half human
Hieght/ wieght: 5'7/ 120
Hair colour: Changes according to her mood; but normally black
Eye colour: Red. Can change it to blue to appear human.
Occupation: Bounty Hunter

Personality: Adoruk is a very moody demon. If she's not angry or frustrated at stupid people she simply tolerates the world she now lives in. Adoruk is both deeply anti-social and a hermit; she will only deal with people to ensure She has food and money to repair and improve her weapon and armor.

Appearance: Adoruk's skin is so pale she appears to be dead. She normally has jet black hair-- which she keeps long and in a briad to keep it away from her face-- but it changes to suit her mood. Red when she's angry, Green when she's calm, Purple when she's focused, Blue when she's sad and Blond when she's happy. She is very lean and muscular but not so muscular that she almost looks like a man. Adoruk almost always has Her leather armor on. Black leather pants and a black leather long sleeved top that does up like a corset in the back. She wears knee- high leather boots that have a big chunky heel. And she carries her Scimitars belted around her waist at all times. If the weather permits she also wears a long leather trench coat; it too is black.

History: Adoruk is the untold of daughter of Thanatos. The Greek God of death and one of Hades minions, he is also a demon. Thanatos had a love affair with Persephone, Hades wife, and the result was Adoruk. This is why she is the untold of daughter of the underworld. Because Persephone is only able to return to hades during the winter, she was able to keep her pregnancy hidden from her husband. When the child was born with wings and horns she knew she could never keep the child or tell anyone on Olympus of her treachery. In a state of fear she cast a spell on the young demon, allowing it to distort its features so that it appeared human and charged a peasant family with bearing the child and keeping her true identity secret.
Adoruk lived like a normal human until one day, when she was 11 years old, one of her siblings began to tease her. Saying she was an orphan and did not belong to the family. Assulted with rage and sadness, Adoruks hair began to turn a feiry red and her demon wings and horns showed themselves. Unable to control her rage Adoruk attacked the child with a strength equal to that of a perfectly trained warrior. The young boy was killed and the parents banished the child from their home.
Able to take care of herself Adoruk wandered alone for nearly fifty years as a child bandit. Stealing food and money everywhere she could, however, Adoruk remained sad and lonely for these fifty years.
Watched by her father from birth Thanatos decided he'd seen enough of his daughters suffering and, in exchange for an eternity of servitude to Hades, was given leave to spend ten years with his daughter. He taught her the basics of Tai-kwon-do, Jujitsu and Kung fu and taught her the most important lesson of all. In order to save his daughter from Tarteros, the place he feared she'd end up if she kept on her path as a bandit, he taught her the importance of doing what was right. "As a demon" He told her "You are a very powerful creature and must learn to restrain yourself from the destruction that is built into you. Use your powers to save the weak from evil and one day I will see you float down the river Acheron and be able to be with you for the rest of eternity." Encouraged by her fathers parting words and gift-- her two scimitars-- Adoruk then was determined to become a bounty hunter. A person who hunted brought justice by hunting those who had elluded the law. She has been travelling as a bounty hunter ever since.
Whenever she has time off she uses the large sums of money she obtains from her job and goes to teachers of the three styles of marial arts her father began teaching her and learns more and more. Thus far it has been a slow process.

Skills:
Shape shifting: She can change her body by getting rid of her devil horns, wings, tail, long nails and fangs so that she appears human. It's the only way she gets work.
Physical: Adoruk is fast and strong though she is still training herself off of the basics that her father left her with. She knows the basics of Kung-fu, Jujitsu, and Tai-Kwon-Do.
Swordsmanship: She isn't very well trained with her swords yet. Though she loves to use her scimitars, she is more powerful with her fists. She also, in her time off, finds people to train her with her scimitars.

Weapons:
Night wind: Is strongest during storms and the new moon when the darkness is the strongest, During those nights it doubles as a flashlight because it glows in the darkness. It also becomes unbreakable and sharper.
Twilight's Demise: Is strongest during the time between night and day. During this time this blade also becomes unbreakable and sharp. It also becomes poinonous and deals d.o.t.(damage over time) 1 damage every 10 seconds for a maxumum time of a minute for a maximum of 6 damage.

Items:
A Water bottle
And a small dagger she carries with her just in case.

Witchblade
12-01-08, 08:13 AM
Skills - can you separate Kung-fu, Jujitsu and Tai-Kwon-Do from the 'Physical' skill listing, as they are their own skills. She may be Above Average with one, and below average with the rest, or Average with two and Below Average with the rest, including her swordsmanship.

Weapons - both of your scimitars may be made of steel. Also, your d.o.t sounds like something you picked up from a video game. While that's not exactly bad, we don't count points here for damage, we just write it. So in terms of our role playing, that doesn't make very much sense. Instead, you can say something along the lines of 'deals extra damage arounds the area of the infected wound for up to one minute'. The poison on the blade can kill the victim if they have not been treated roughly six hours after being infected.

I need you to list the armour you specified in her appearance under an 'armour' listing. Probably placed best after Weapons.

Just edit those changes into your original post and then post here again letting me know it's done so I can take another look at your profile. ^^

Aryna
12-01-08, 05:21 PM
Kung-fu: Below average.
Tai-Kwon-Do: Below Average
Jujitsu: Ablove average

Swordsmanship: Below average.

Weapons: Both swords are made of steel.
Twilight's Demise: Is strongest during the time between night and day. During this time this blade also becomes unbreakable and sharp. It also becomes poinonous and it deals damage over time and if left untreated for over a day it can paralyze the limb it pierced and force it to be amputated. If struck in lethal areas (Gut, chest, head or groin) It can become lethal, again after about a day of leaving it untreated, as it can stop the heart or lungs brain or cease function of the "nether regions".

Armor: She wears Skin tight black leather armor that covers her entire body; except her head hands and feet of course. The leather is plated with a thin layer of steal to add protection in the areas its needed (the chest and back). Her boots are steel toe black leather knee high high-heels and her gloves, also black leather, are meant and built for getting a good grip on things.

Witchblade
12-02-08, 09:07 AM
As for the lethal areas being struck, it's still going to take up to six hours for the poison to take effect and kill a person. No instant kill poison at this level.

Just edit all of that into your original post, please. Then you should be good to go.