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Savannah.Rose
11-30-08, 03:35 PM
Name: Avalon Estelle Emock
Age: 16
Race: Elf
Hair Color: Dark reddish brown
Eye Color: Emrald green
Height: 5 feet 6 inches
Weight: 110lbs
Occupation: Healer

Personality: Avalon is rather shy and tends to only speak when needed. She always is willing to help someone, but most of the time it's only when they ask.She likes who she is but feels that she needs to be more out going.

Appearance: http://i440.photobucket.com/albums/qq122/Savvy_rose/SCAN0045.jpgjust a rough drawing colored with pencils...

History: When Avalon was born her mother left her with a band of gypsies to be raised. Even when she was small the gypsies knew there was something unique about her (not including her being an elf). She was able to manipulate the very earth around her for small amounts of time. By age 5 she knew most of the healing, neutral and killing plants that ever grew. On her 12th birthday as a gift from the gypsies she recieved a long bow with a dozen arrows. Also at 12 she satred to learn how to make salves and potions that could heal or hurt most creatures. When she turned 15 she found a tree spirit in the form of a trumpet flower, uprooted and near death, on that day it became her familiar. the flower was able to survive because Avalon fed it a special life sustaining potion of her own design. The potion also made the usually inanimate flower able to walk and move. At age 16 Avalon left the band of gypsies that raised her to become a nomadic healer.

Skills:
Healing-Avalon has not gotten the experience to heal large injuries for now she can only heal small cuts and brusies
making salves- the salves that avalon makes do not have the ability to heal large wounds but they do help ease pain the injured being is feeling
manipulating earth- small portions for small amounts of time
potion making- some of Avalon potions are medium in strength, her strongest 2 are ones that keep Rayen alive and another that when given will knock out the person for a few minutes
archery- Avalon has been training on her long bow since the age of 12 so her aim is quite good the distance her arrows reach at best is 20 yards

Equipment:
A long bow- inlaid with carved paintings of flowers and vines
A dozen arrows- same design as the bow green feathers and one with a poisioned tip- Avalon will only use this arrow in extreme need be cases, when struck with this arrows it can take up to six hours to die from the poision-When Avalon uses this arrow on another person she treats the wound before she makes her escape
A large satchel- leather with floral patterns-used to carry plants,potions, etc.

Familiars:
Name:Rayen
Sex: female
Age: 1 year 2months
Height: 2 feet
Appearence: An uprooted trumpet flower tree spirit
Her yellow and orange petals curve to make the shape of a bell, her blue-green stem is quite long about 1 foot, the rest of her height is her bloom face and root legs and feet.
with enough of her pollen you can clear air passages to help breathing but with too much it can also close them long enough to make someone pass out for a few hours form lack of oxygen.

Witchblade
12-01-08, 08:24 AM
Hi there and welcome to Althanas. ^^ I'll be looking over your profile and going over any changes that I need you to make.

Skills - I need you to separate her skills and gives them all brief descriptions so that I know how strong she is with them. Something like this:

Healing - Avalong is able to heal minor cuts, burns and bruises rather quickly, as well as minor fractures. But she cannot heal major injuries... etc.

You can always look through other people's profiles in archive if you need help figuring out what to say about a certain skill.

Equipment - Only five of Avalon's arrows may be poisoned right now, and without treatment it will take the person up to six hours to die from being pierced by these.

Familiars - Rayen - can you please give more of a description of Rayen?

Name:
Sex:
Age:
Height:
...etc

Also, right now Rayen cannot close people's throats off to the point where they choke and die. She can make it very hard for them to breathe and possibly pass out from loss of oxygen.

Make those changes and then post here again lettign me know it's done and I'll take another look.

Savannah.Rose
12-03-08, 09:47 AM
Thank you for the help all corrections made :]

Witchblade
12-03-08, 10:08 AM
Approverized!