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ZekeBK
12-07-08, 03:30 PM
Name: Ezekiel Uak
Race: human
Age:31
Gender: male
Hair Color: dirty blonde(long / curly)
Eye Color: dark blue
Height: 6ft 2 in
Weight: 238lbs
Appearance: Rugged face and hands, with extremely toned muscles from crushing the skulls of his bounties
Occupation: Bounty Hunter
Personality: Zeke is usually laid black and carefree, but when someone gets in his face or, messes with a close friend, he gets real angry, it happens when he’s drunk too. Zeke likes to mess around, but can be serious even if he’s drunk. Zeke keeps his friends close, and his enemies closer… in a body bag and a knife in their head. Zeke also loves money.
History: When Zeke was just a boy he lived in a little house on the countryside, with his mom, dad, younger brother, and his older sister. He learned swordplay from his dad when he was young, and keeps practicing. When his father died, he took up the job of being a bounty hunter, and he was happy for a while, being loved and renown. But all that stopped when his sister was assassinated because of his affiliation with the law, and how much he did to their cult. Zeke sought revenge and killed the assassin that killed his sister.
Even though he killed the assassin, he still felt a void in his soul, he felt he could never show his face around his family and he fled the land.
Skills:
Swordsmanship: Zeke has practiced for years and years making himself more than deadly in close range combat, long range isn’t his specialty.
Strength: strength of an ox(1.5)
Speed: average speed(1.0)
Equipment:
Tkine: platemail armor with a gold trim that can channel small amounts of magic from attacks from enemy's or other magical items and let Zeke use it(silver)
Tguse: double edged sword with various jewels set in that can use the armor’s channeled magic and launch it back(steel)
Troxe: dagger(steel)

Witchblade
12-07-08, 09:56 PM
Hi there and welcome to Althanas. I'll be the mod in charge of going over your profile and asking you to make any necessary changes.

Let's start off with Zeke's skills first. Zeke can be Above Average on our rating system in swordsmanship. As for speed and strength, you may pick one of them to be 1.5x that of an average human, but not both.

Equipment - Silver and gold is actually a weaker metal than iron and would afford less protection in battle. Also, what kind of channeling can his armour do at this point? Keep in mind that with a level zero profile this can't be too powerful. Tguse may be made of steel and feel free to keep the jewels, but under the stipulation that the sword may never be sold. Troxe may also be made of steel.

Just make those edits to your first post and post here again letting me know it's done so I can take another look at it. ^^

ZekeBK
12-08-08, 08:52 AM
So wait he either has to be average running and not too strong, or average strength and not that fast? Or can he be strong, but not fast?

Witchblade
12-08-08, 08:58 AM
Correct, either his strength or his speed may be more than that of an average human (1.5), while the other will remain average at the level of an average human. It can be increased later on when you level up with you wish.

ZekeBK
12-08-08, 10:48 AM
So this is good right?

Witchblade
12-09-08, 09:33 AM
Well, we're getting there. ^^

You don't need to have the speed mentioned since he just has normal speed. How exactly is he channeling magic into his armour? Is he absorbing other people's attacks? Does he channel it from the air around him? I need you to be more specific with that ability please.

ZekeBK
12-09-08, 02:15 PM
there!

Witchblade
12-09-08, 04:00 PM
Approverized!