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Gado
12-11-08, 03:47 PM
Name: Sumnasir Severyt (Sumnas in short)

Age: 23

Race: Zlagbar: desert people living in the city of Gererdic. They live mainly of trading, manufacturing knives and throwing weapons and by selling their services as Mercenaries, Bounty hunters and Assasins

Hair Color: He has No hair, but if he had hair it would have been green, blue or brown.

Eye Color: Purple

Height: 4’5

Weight: 60 pounds

Occupation: Assasin

Personality: He is a cruel being that always speaks in riddles unless he is forced not to. This being has no honour and will not do anything for anyone except if it benefits himself. He never sleeps and if he does it will result in three days of singing. He is absolutely insane.

Appearance: Gray pale skin, Purple deep manic eyes, Black marks on his face, four black marks is going from the back at his head and ending at the side top and bottom of his face at both sides, there is also black marks around both of his eyes starting from his forehead to both sides of his nose. Pointy ears. He has bandages around his upper body under any clothing he wears and also parts of his arms and legs.(( i made a drawing of him since he is kinda.. weird looking )) http://cheesedoodlescare.deviantart.com/art/Sumnas-The-final-making-106063254


History: Sumnasir Severyt was born and raised in the desert city of Gererdic, as a youngling he received basic training from his father and brother in the ways of the assassin. It did not take long tough, before the people of Gererdic started to see Sumnasir’s insanity and cruelness. One day when he and his brother was having a simple training match Sumnasir killed his brother by severing his head of. He later said it was an accident and his father had no choice to believe him, bad choice as he was murdered by a unknown assassin a few days later. Not being chained to anyone Sumnas left Gererdic and wandered off into the desert where he survived by what the desert had to offer. and other people whom he murdered and robbed. Training his own personal fighting style he quickly learned how to kill in basic ways without putting too much effort in it, as Gererdic often sent assasins and small groups of low-armored soldiers after him he specialized in fighting using only his speed and small light-weapons.

Skills:

Cutting Precision: By using his small light-weapons he specializes on cutting up blood veins and important muscle arteries with incredible precision. (Average)

Light-Chained weapons: His whole fighting style is specialized in using Light-chained weapons combined with other light-weapons. (Average)

Razorblades/Small knives/Shards of Glass/Etc: He uses these small seemingly not so dangerous weapons as a sidekick for his chained weapons (Average)


Un-armed combat: Sumnasir has almost no training with un-armed combat so he can only do basic fighting moves while in un-armed combat, and offcourse combine some dodging teqniques from his overal fighting skill into this but he still have very poor chance against someone with a weapon if he does not have one. (Below average)
Equipment: Light-Chained Sword edge (The edge of a sharp sword chained to a handle, has the same attack distance as a normal sword, the chains that chains it is made of steel, the sword is also made of steel.) Eight thin steel-Razorblades in his pocket-bag.

Taskmienster
12-11-08, 07:24 PM
Hi, and welcome to Althanas. Interesting race you have here! Just a quick note before I do anything, seeing as you are a desert race you can easily fit this character right into the continent of Fallien. It is completely covered as a desert, with a rich history and backstory that would work very well with your current storyline. Not trying to tell you to do anything, just suggesting where it may be easiest to start and hop in. =)

The only thing I see is that you need to change the chains that are attached to the sword to steel at most, since I can't approve a new profile with mythril. You can always quest for an upgrade, or visit The Bazaar in the future and pay for an upgrade that way.

And, do you only have one sword? It says swords, but you're not specific as to how many. Clarify that and we'll be set.

Gado
12-11-08, 10:45 PM
Equipment: Light-Chained Sword edge (The edge of a sharp sword chained to a handle, has the same attack distance as a normal sword, the chains that chains it is made of steel, the sword is also made of steel.) Eight thin steel-Razorblades in his pocket-bag.


((il also add one skill if thats okay))

skill:

unarmed: having not learnt much unarmed Sumnasir is a horrible fighter in hand to hand combat. (below average)

Gado
12-11-08, 10:47 PM
((also il do the change of location))

Location: Fallien

Taskmienster
12-12-08, 03:19 PM
Edit all that into the first post and you'll be good to go!