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Atenathon
12-20-08, 04:59 PM
The characters name:
Namless HERO

Age:
26

Race:
human-draconian

Hair color:
dark blond

Eye color:
brown

Hight:
5' 8''

Weight:
130lb

Occupation:
holy smith

Personality:
A strong willed, stubborn young man that that usualy keeps to himself. Nameless understands about strategy and can fight with his heart and his soul. His strong head comes from the human side of him, and the stratigic warrior from his draconian half. he has a continuing internal battle between his two halfs, he strugals constiantly to find his true identity.

Appearance:
Thin build, short wavy hair, average face shape, looks like a human from the waist up, has the legs and tail of a draconian but no wings.

History:
Nameless Hero (who oftien just likes going by hero) is a half human half drake that stands out in a crowd like a swore thumb. his birth place is un know, even to him, and his parents are just as much of a mystery as his birth place. Most of what Hero remembers is growing up in a christian mosk and rased by monks. He was taught the art of crafting weapons and blesed items while he was growing up, but most of all he learned the art of civilized close range combat. Another advantage of growing up in the mosk was that Hero was able to get an education in many areas, aspecialy in how to use the power that thier God blessed them with. After living with them several years Hero wanted to see the world. The monks had given him all the items that he would need to make a journy around the surounding country. The last thing that the monks gave him was a pendiant with a dragon in sterling silver on an onix circle and a two handed sword hilt that could produce a blade of light when the user pour his energy into it, but it is only as strong as the user is.

Skills:
At will Nameless Hero can manipulate light and other forms of energy (the blessings of God) and use this skill to do many thing, for example creating energy balls that he could throw at his enemies, create a strong wind that could cary him, form fire in the palm of his hand, create things out of light for a given amount of time, and even redirecting any attacks that use energy by way of light shield. But for now (because he dose not have a lot of endurance) he can only create a small breaze, start a tiny fire(like a match), create a small light lantern, create energy balls a little bigger than his hand that do shock damage and sometimes stun, and read the energy type of any attack if it has one.
Hero has average sword skills and medical skills.

Equipment:
A plain iorn short sword, a iorn hunting dager, a back pack, a medical kit, a light river man's shirt, leather vest, loose pants, leather boots shaped to his feet, a pendiant that has a silver dragon on an onix circle.

Familar:
A tiger cub



"I walk this road, not alone, but with the spirate of God by my side and my sword in my hands, and I will never be stopped on this path of life." -Hero

Ataraxis
12-20-08, 11:39 PM
Hey there Atenathon! Welcome to Althanas, and I hope you enjoy your stay!

It would be very helpful if you could separate each distinct section of your profile, to make it easier to read both for yourself and those who are browsing your profile. If you could do that, I'd appreciate it!

And now, for the big stuff: I need to know more about how he can manipulate light and other forms of energy. It's far too vague right now, and I need you elaborate so that I can correctly gauge his level of power. After that, we can work together toward balancing him!

other than that, his hunting dagger can be made of either iron or steel. I'll also consider intermediate to mean 'average'.

Make those changes first and then I'll get back to you!

Atenathon
12-21-08, 10:15 AM
thanks for that I realy needed help with creating my character, I hope you can reply quickly



I have a question, would I be able to have a tiger cub for my familiar?

Ataraxis
12-21-08, 05:42 PM
Indeed, you can!

And his abilities are decent, perhaps even a bit weak, since a small breeze and a lantern can't do damage, and the most he can do with that fire is run around and hope he sets something on fire...

... but then I noticed you forgot to mention at what level of power his energy balls are. Right now, I'd allow it if he could throw a maximum of 3 energy balls per day, each ball being about 6 inches in diameter. Each causes minor shock damage an can sometimes stun the target.

And you can have a tiger cub as familiar. The only rule is that you can't use it in a battle unless your opponent agrees.

After you make these final changes, you'll be ready for approval!

Atenathon
12-21-08, 05:56 PM
Thanks again for the reply, I wanted to make him a fair beginer with high potential, but not too strong from the start. That way no one would complain about me power playing.
:)

Ataraxis
12-21-08, 06:31 PM
Alright then, this looks good. Go on and have fun writing!

You are hereby approved!