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silicson
01-19-09, 11:41 AM
Name: Saint Catillin Silicson
Age: 550(total)
Race: Human , ascended to Light Elf
Hair Color: Silver
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 190cm
Weight:70kg
*Occupation:Saint, Spiritual Leader

*Personality: His kindness and self-sacrifice are the most striking parts of his personality.Some traces of stubbornness and pride, are some of his minus.

Appearance: A young looking human, who you would give only 21 years with pointy ears, silver hair, and brown eyes. Sweet appearance.Unless your unholy,..:rolleyes:

History: In the beginning of the world, after the Original Rupture between Material and Spiritual , the Saints were called forth, to lead the inhabitants of Material to Ascension or to reach Spiritual Sanctity.Saint Silicson, is the last of the 10th Saints.And he now tries to find the other 9 among the inhabitants of Material world. The other 9 and himself, we're resurrected during the Resurrection of the Saints. They were all Permanently sealed slayed. This can only happen very rare only if the Saint losses his faith that he will better the Material; or if all the inhabitants of the Material desire his death; or if his death will salvage and ascend a lot of people (same thing that happened to Saint Silicson, last time).He now has risen to gather the rest of the Saints and bring the fusion between Material and Spiritual, as intended in the beginning.
He was once a human, when he was called.But after the Unbiding , he resurrected as a Light Elf.This is his key to Ascension.

Skills: *Holy protection-The Saint temporarily teleports in other dimension
for 1 minute.He practically becomes invisible for that time for the normal reality, and he can move at normal speed, but he can't interact with the normal dimension and in reverse( vice-versa) .Re-use time 5 seconds.
*Divine Remembrance- Once the Saint dies, one of the gods will
automatically resurrect him from 30 mins to 1 hr.Instant re-use.
*Holy shield - When the life of the Saint is nearly depleted,
he creates a shield around him that makes all skills within 15 seconds ,
be backfired.After two attacks the shield is destroyed.Any spell that is cast
or attack at a higher level than the character cannot be backfired at the person.
*Divine word - Magic attack skill.The Saint calls the Heaven and the Earth upon
the opponent taking 5 seconds to charge and 3 seconds to strike, damaging the opponent
and stunning him for 3 seconds as though hit by three steel hammer within
10 yards of the caster.
*Divine spark- Regular m.atk skill. The caster throws a spark at the opponent, damaging him
for half as a normal strength swipe of an iron sword would feal.Cast time 3 sec.Re-use instant.

Equipment: Holy Ring( to call the "Familiar") , Holy Robe( used for skills).


*Familiars:When the Saint needs he can call his Guardian Archangel,Marcus, to protect him using his Holy Ring.
He gives 1/5 damage increased and 1/5 magical attack damage protection.He can only stay 1 minute.

Taskmienster
01-19-09, 04:07 PM
Hey hey, and welcome to Althanas. Always good to see another holy figure on the site, haha. Just a few things to look over and edit and you'll be on your way!

For Holy Protection: If you could please explain that a little more. When you go to a different dimension can you move around in the real world? Like it is teleporting away from the battle and ending up in a new place when you return to the material world of Althanas? Also, can you cut that to make it so that you can only be gone for up to a minute.

Holy Shield: Since we don't really use percentages for heal reasons, it'd be best if you changed that to where he can activate the shield when he gets close to death, and it lasts only 15 seconds. Any spell that is cast or attack at a higher level than the character cannot be backfired at the person, and more than two attacks (for now) will destroy the shield. Also, if you've already fallen it won't activate.

Can you please explain Divine Word, like what kind of attack is it? How long does it take to cast? What damage does it do? Also, can you please explain the "Familiar"? What can the archangel do? How does he protect you? And can you please put a time limit on how long he can help?

silicson
01-20-09, 03:44 AM
[edited]How can I measure damage?
Does the skill need to have re-use time?
Do I have to mention something like "common attack skills"?
Any other tips. :)

Taskmienster
01-20-09, 03:57 AM
Not really anything set in stone as to what to do about those kindsa questions. It's pretty much whatever you feel like doing, but within moderation. That's why I'm here to make things leveled out and moderate. =p

Alright, the only thing I have to say is that you can decrease the time it takes to cast down to around 3-5 seconds, and the spell can be cast instantly if you want. Just try not to use it too much, like more than 3 times in a battle or so, and you'll be fine! Let's just say that the blast is either blunt force, like a steel hammer striking the person within 10 yards of the caster, or you can make it like a sword swipe within 10 yards that's equal to a normal strength swipe of an iron sword... trying to put it so you're equal at least to most level 0's. And since you don't have any weapons or anything that should be fine.

If you want to edit that in so that you're not at some huge disadvantage compared to other people that'd be awesome.

silicson
01-20-09, 08:00 AM
[edited]anything else? :rolleyes:

Taskmienster
01-20-09, 12:35 PM
Nope! That is, lol. :p

You are hereby APPROVED!

Now go do your priestly stuff, lol