NightCast
02-06-09, 08:27 AM
Ok.
So all of you may, or may not, be aware that there has been a solo that I've been working on ssssssllllooooooowwwwwwllllllyyyyyy in... Dheathain. Unfortunately I've hit a bit of a block. It happens to me on occasion. And you see the problem isn't so much a: "I don't know where I'm going with this," or "Where do I go from here?" issue.
It's a feedback issue.
Throughout my writing, whether it be through a class or whatever, I have had constant feedback on my writing. This has made me somewhat of a "spoiled" writer. It makes me almost unable to function without it, though I have been getting better. So what I'm looking for is some feedback and constructive criticism about my thread, I'll edit the link in as soon as I'm done here.
But here's what I'm looking for:
Characterization
Plot-line
Content
Things that stand out to you (whether they be good or bad things)
Don't worry so much about flow and the structure of some of the paragraphs. I'm aware that they're choppy and flow about as smoothly as sandpaper on bare skin. I'm working on it already. Thanks to any, if any at all, who go out of their way to possibly help me out here.
EDIT: Here's the link (http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?t=17995)
So all of you may, or may not, be aware that there has been a solo that I've been working on ssssssllllooooooowwwwwwllllllyyyyyy in... Dheathain. Unfortunately I've hit a bit of a block. It happens to me on occasion. And you see the problem isn't so much a: "I don't know where I'm going with this," or "Where do I go from here?" issue.
It's a feedback issue.
Throughout my writing, whether it be through a class or whatever, I have had constant feedback on my writing. This has made me somewhat of a "spoiled" writer. It makes me almost unable to function without it, though I have been getting better. So what I'm looking for is some feedback and constructive criticism about my thread, I'll edit the link in as soon as I'm done here.
But here's what I'm looking for:
Characterization
Plot-line
Content
Things that stand out to you (whether they be good or bad things)
Don't worry so much about flow and the structure of some of the paragraphs. I'm aware that they're choppy and flow about as smoothly as sandpaper on bare skin. I'm working on it already. Thanks to any, if any at all, who go out of their way to possibly help me out here.
EDIT: Here's the link (http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?t=17995)