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Ariana
02-06-09, 07:04 PM
Name: Ariana
Age: 19
Race: Vampire/werewolf
Hair Color: pitch black
Eye Color: yellow when calm / blood red when enraged
Height: 5'6
Weight:120
Occupation: Mercenary/Warrior of death/Assassin.

Personality: has no personality, only shows it in the presence of her master. She is quiet, yet devoted, will fight to the death. Un-social and will only talk when it benifits her work. But during the full moon she loses control of herself and goes on a killing spree, killing all who get in her way.

Appearance: Ariana stands roughly 5'6 with a curvy body. curves in all the right places. Her hair is pitch black, Her eyes are a bright yellow when calm and a blood red when enraged. Her hair is so long it goes down to her knees, but her hair is always in a braided ponytail. Her outfit, per say is that of a ninja. A black face mask to cover her face and her identity. A black long sleeve cloth shirt, which is tight yet not too tight. Tight black cloth pants with a black belt to hold her belongings. Her shoes are a simple shoes that rarely make any noise.

History: Ariana's past is a mystery at the time. But she does know she has family who resent her exsistence. And that she has lived to serve her Master for almost her whole life. What led up to her meeting her Master could either be labled as luck or sheer stupidity. She had just ran away from her father and mother who would yell at her for small things, like talking out of line, bringing people over without asking first. Those kinda small things. Well When she was about 7, she ran away from home in the middle of the night after her parents were asleep. And pretty much as soon as she manages to get away, she bumps into her now Master. He took her in, taught her the ways of the Assassin, and asked her one favor. Kill his son. When she does, anything she wants, she will have.

Skills: Able to telepathically move things within her eyesight up to no more then 20 pds to a max of 5 yards away. She has the ability to use a sword above average.


Equipment: A long dual bladed sword made of steel that can part to become two seperate blades. The blade itself is 24 inches. Along the front of the blade is an inscription that reads "Akusma Ta shinigami" which means "warrior to the god of death." She also carries around a small puch for her essentials like a map of the continent, trade routes, small parcel of parchment for letters to her boss, a quill and ink to write.

Familiars: N/A

Taskmienster
02-07-09, 12:54 PM
Hey hey, and welcome to the site. Just a few things to note and you'll be on your way!

Telepathy: If you could, at this level, please set an upwards height equivalent of how much she can pick up, something like 20 lbs max, and can be split to pick up more than one thing (to a max of 4 objects) as long as all of the objects don't exceed 20 lbs. So like two boxes that are 10 pounds can be picked up, or one box that is 20.

I'd like for you to remove the future sight for now, since it's a bit too strong for a level 0. Also, change all sword styles to just a couple basic ones at above average skills.

The blades need to be either steel or iron as well.

And I'd like to see at least a small history, it's a pet-peeve of mine to have a character without any history..

Ariana
02-07-09, 01:12 PM
Ok everything is added and edited like you asked.

Taskmienster
02-07-09, 01:21 PM
Alright, looks fine. Welcome to the site and have fun. If you have questions feel free to ask via PM, or you can post them in the "Roleplayers Corner" for others to jump in and help whenever free.

Approved!