Heinrich Black
02-17-09, 07:00 PM
Here's my character. Looking foreward to comments, critisizm, and eventually a registered character. Please, feedback!
Name: Heinrik Unheilv
Age: 18
Race: Human
Hair Color: 'Coffee' brown
Eye Color: Dark brown
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 172 lb.
Occupation: Salvaran nobility
Personality: Often considered exceptionaly reserved and private (even sinister), though as all young men he is prone to confrontation and outburst when the right nerves are struck.
Appearance: A healthy young man, though his hairline is noticably receded nearly to the top of his scalp. His face is sharp, angular and not unnatractive. His skin is unwrinkled and untanned, apperent to have spent much time indoors. There is a finely groomed, thin moustache adorning his upper lip.
His traveler's clothing is colored in shades of dark browns, and his knee-low hooded cloak is dyed deep, dark blue that his often seen as black in shade and night.
History: Matheas Unheilv was full blood noble, as his father and father's father before him. He inherited a wealthy estate, many servants, and fair parcel of fertile land (by Salvar standards.) The aristocratic Unheilv family was often admired, married easily, and known for its good fortune of male heirs for every generation. But Matheas himself would prove to be the doom of the family's good standing. A flawed and selfish man, nearly excommunicated for his impious behavior and luxury, his conversation with the kingdom often arrogent and graceless and eventually ignored, his servents neglected as well as their farms, and then notorious scandal and corruption; it is often said his only contribution, his only boon to the Unheilv legacy, is that of his four sons.
Of his four sons, in order from eldest to youngest, was Deitar, promising and strong, Artur, brash and ambitious; and then the fraternal twins (non-identical) Heinrik and Cristiff. Their mother died in the birth of those twins. The Unheilv sons were raised by their servents, and often were seperate in the large estate. All were taught well by scholars, scribes, and churchmen; despite their father, the church held great promise in the Unheilv's future support. They all grew to be decent young men, though not marrying as early as often other upper class Salvarans were. It was a great travesty, then, the months when Matheas grew old. Eldest son Deitar grew fataly ill, and passed in agony. The aged aristocrat Matheas, though his self a pitiable and spiteful creature, was now the one to choose the next Lord Unheilv titleholder out of the younger sons. Heinrik Unheilv lived under his father's house in luxury. But simple excess of the flesh did not interest the young noble; power and control, these appealed to his ego. And that was just out of his reach, yet impossible in his position of second in line to the Unheilv estate. Plotting his older brother Artur's ruin would be his occupation for the time. Heinrik acted with haste, is plot would be infolded quickly and shockingly; as it was only a matter of time before Artur claimed the title.
Young Heinrik bribed the immidiate servents of the household with promises of luxury, if he were to be lord Unheilv. The servants had been treated poorly, often by their previous lord, and most leaped to the promise. A contrary household servant was found killed, as if by a group of attackers, and his body thrown into the cellar.
Heinrik's plan was to frame his brother with high treason. The scribe forged documents of bribes taken, illicit information given, secret meetings to be held. The servents would tell lies of how Artur threatened their lives if they spoke of the suspicious actions. And, in the end, Heinrik would stage a revealing of his brother as a traitor, a sympathizer of conniving foreigners. He kept much of the scheme secret, which was wise, yet there would be an devestating consequence.
Artur Unheilv was killed, beaten to death, his bones and muscles crushed, blood pooled about him, all within the house' walls. There would be no trial for the murderer, as none was truly found. The servants assumed that it was a part of Heinrik's plan, and shunned him for the brutal action. It was even possible, Heinrik thought, that it was one of the householders who had taken his bribery the wrong direction.
Though it was never spoken directly to him, it was obvious that the servants of the Unheilvs, Matheas, and his fraternal twin brother accused him of the murder, as his motivation was clear. The title would now go to Cristiff, whom Heinrik considered a bafoon. Uninterested in living in unspoken persecution, and under the rule of his oaf brother, young Heinrik the noble set off, without warning, onto the road. He plans now for greater powers, beyond that of a simple noble on a parcel of land. He does not know what his future goal will be, yet is confident in his own means.
Skills: Moderate swordsmanship training, horse riding, appropriate knowledge in geography, Salvaran society, military, diplomacy, religion, and economy.
Equipment: Misericorde (Mercygiver), a small, thin-bladed steel dagger used for delivering the deadly strike to a dying or unconcious opponents. The hilt and guard of the Misericorde is silver, and a shade darker then the blade. Heinrik's misericorde was a present from his now deceased uncle-in-law, who considered him a favorite among the Unheilv heirs.
Name: Heinrik Unheilv
Age: 18
Race: Human
Hair Color: 'Coffee' brown
Eye Color: Dark brown
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 172 lb.
Occupation: Salvaran nobility
Personality: Often considered exceptionaly reserved and private (even sinister), though as all young men he is prone to confrontation and outburst when the right nerves are struck.
Appearance: A healthy young man, though his hairline is noticably receded nearly to the top of his scalp. His face is sharp, angular and not unnatractive. His skin is unwrinkled and untanned, apperent to have spent much time indoors. There is a finely groomed, thin moustache adorning his upper lip.
His traveler's clothing is colored in shades of dark browns, and his knee-low hooded cloak is dyed deep, dark blue that his often seen as black in shade and night.
History: Matheas Unheilv was full blood noble, as his father and father's father before him. He inherited a wealthy estate, many servants, and fair parcel of fertile land (by Salvar standards.) The aristocratic Unheilv family was often admired, married easily, and known for its good fortune of male heirs for every generation. But Matheas himself would prove to be the doom of the family's good standing. A flawed and selfish man, nearly excommunicated for his impious behavior and luxury, his conversation with the kingdom often arrogent and graceless and eventually ignored, his servents neglected as well as their farms, and then notorious scandal and corruption; it is often said his only contribution, his only boon to the Unheilv legacy, is that of his four sons.
Of his four sons, in order from eldest to youngest, was Deitar, promising and strong, Artur, brash and ambitious; and then the fraternal twins (non-identical) Heinrik and Cristiff. Their mother died in the birth of those twins. The Unheilv sons were raised by their servents, and often were seperate in the large estate. All were taught well by scholars, scribes, and churchmen; despite their father, the church held great promise in the Unheilv's future support. They all grew to be decent young men, though not marrying as early as often other upper class Salvarans were. It was a great travesty, then, the months when Matheas grew old. Eldest son Deitar grew fataly ill, and passed in agony. The aged aristocrat Matheas, though his self a pitiable and spiteful creature, was now the one to choose the next Lord Unheilv titleholder out of the younger sons. Heinrik Unheilv lived under his father's house in luxury. But simple excess of the flesh did not interest the young noble; power and control, these appealed to his ego. And that was just out of his reach, yet impossible in his position of second in line to the Unheilv estate. Plotting his older brother Artur's ruin would be his occupation for the time. Heinrik acted with haste, is plot would be infolded quickly and shockingly; as it was only a matter of time before Artur claimed the title.
Young Heinrik bribed the immidiate servents of the household with promises of luxury, if he were to be lord Unheilv. The servants had been treated poorly, often by their previous lord, and most leaped to the promise. A contrary household servant was found killed, as if by a group of attackers, and his body thrown into the cellar.
Heinrik's plan was to frame his brother with high treason. The scribe forged documents of bribes taken, illicit information given, secret meetings to be held. The servents would tell lies of how Artur threatened their lives if they spoke of the suspicious actions. And, in the end, Heinrik would stage a revealing of his brother as a traitor, a sympathizer of conniving foreigners. He kept much of the scheme secret, which was wise, yet there would be an devestating consequence.
Artur Unheilv was killed, beaten to death, his bones and muscles crushed, blood pooled about him, all within the house' walls. There would be no trial for the murderer, as none was truly found. The servants assumed that it was a part of Heinrik's plan, and shunned him for the brutal action. It was even possible, Heinrik thought, that it was one of the householders who had taken his bribery the wrong direction.
Though it was never spoken directly to him, it was obvious that the servants of the Unheilvs, Matheas, and his fraternal twin brother accused him of the murder, as his motivation was clear. The title would now go to Cristiff, whom Heinrik considered a bafoon. Uninterested in living in unspoken persecution, and under the rule of his oaf brother, young Heinrik the noble set off, without warning, onto the road. He plans now for greater powers, beyond that of a simple noble on a parcel of land. He does not know what his future goal will be, yet is confident in his own means.
Skills: Moderate swordsmanship training, horse riding, appropriate knowledge in geography, Salvaran society, military, diplomacy, religion, and economy.
Equipment: Misericorde (Mercygiver), a small, thin-bladed steel dagger used for delivering the deadly strike to a dying or unconcious opponents. The hilt and guard of the Misericorde is silver, and a shade darker then the blade. Heinrik's misericorde was a present from his now deceased uncle-in-law, who considered him a favorite among the Unheilv heirs.