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new_guy
02-23-09, 07:43 PM
Name: Dante Foreheart

Age: 19

Race: human / demon

Hair Color: Jet black with streaks of white through his hair.

Eye Color: Pure blue. Blue as in ocean blue.

Height: 5'8

Weight: 145

Occupation: Body guard / summoner

*Personality: To those who first meet him, they would think that he is mature way beyond his years. He is only 19, but yet acts as if he is way beyond his years. His intelligence sometimes gets the best of him. He keeps to himself unless he really knows you. And that is hard to do since only one person knows him well.

Appearance: Standing an average height, His shirt is a fine cotten shirt with his insignia. A dragon with the wings spread wide and the seven deadly sins encircling the dragon. The shirt is a crimson red with white stitching. His pants, they are not that fancy. They are bland cotten jeans. They are worn, torn and battered. Around his waist he carries his weapon, Jafayette. Jafayette is a single bladed long sword. His shoes are just your average brown leather boots.

History: Dante's life began on Nov. 14th. His parents were so proud of him, he was a straight A student in school, had a gorgeous girlfriend, everything he could want, he had. That all changed when he turned 16. On that day, his parents were murdered and Dante was left for dead, in a burning crumbling manor. Somehow the only bad thing that happened was his right arm. It got covered in scars and suffered from a second degree burn from his hand up to his elbow. The good thing he got out of this was Jafayette. His father's trusty sword. He swore on his parents graves that he would avenge them no matter what the cost.

Skills: Mezmiro- able to memorize a person (requires eye contact for 1 minute)

Shendiro - Able to dim candles and some average sized fire around him in a 15 yard radius.

Gengiro - Able to manipulate the opponents mind and make it look like he has 2 swords.

Blangiro - Able to create a small flame for light/fire. The flame is no bigger then his palm.

Trangiro - Able to summon a small spiritual wolf to help him in times of need.The wolf can only stay in this world for up to 15 minutes. Then must wait 6 hours before being able to summon again. (the wolf is 3 ft high and 4 ft long. The claws are 2 inches long and as strong as iron. The fur is pure jet black with a red streak down he middle back. His eyes are blood red)

Equipment: A large satchel for carring his trinkets and food.

Jafayette- A steel sword that he can use above average.

3 loafs of regular bread

A water skin to carry his water.

Sharpening stone to sharpen his sword.

Maps of all the major cities and trade routes.

a compass to help find his way.

Witchblade
02-23-09, 08:05 PM
Hi there and welcome to Althanas. ^^ I'll be going over your profile with you and asking for you to make a few adjustments so that you can better fit into our world.

Equipment - please include his sword in his equipment, as well as a brief description of the weapon including it's strength. Also include any armour he may have, if he doesn't, don't worry about it.

Skills

Gengiro - How does manipulating time make it appear as if he has two swords? Would that not be a form of mental manipulation, some kind of hallucination, projection... etc.

Trangiro - is the wolf a normal wolf that just follows him around, or is it some kind of spiritual thing?

Shendiro - I need you to be more specific about what you mean by 'lights'. Althanas doesn't really have electricity like most cities on earth do. Most lamps and things that run at night will be fueled by something like caroscene (I think I spelled that wrong) or a simple candle, more complex places by magic.

Make those changes and then post here again so I can take another look at it.

new_guy
02-23-09, 08:38 PM
Ok, edited and fixed. Is it ok now?

Witchblade
02-24-09, 07:30 AM
Approverized!