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ninja_person
03-09-09, 02:27 AM
Name: Ryu
Age: 19
Race: Human / Unknown at this time.
Hair Color: Too short to tell but it is onyx black.
Eye Color: Pure white
Height: 5'8
Weight: One eighty-five
Occupation: Ninja / Demon slayer

Personality: Ryu is the average bad boy. He will so anything for trouble yet knows when to stop and be calm and cool. His personality probably is not the best but when it comes to either friends or anyone or even anything else, His friends get him.

Appearance: Ryu stands an average five-foot eight. His hair is a army style crew cut. No longer then a thin piece of paper. His eyes are a pure white due to his unique heritage. His outfit, is as best described as a ruffian. His shirt is a white cotton shirt that is torn, battered and dirtier then anything on this land. His belt is a black leather belt with steel studs every two inches for thirty-sic inches around. His pants are thirty-eight inches from the waist to the ankle where they are cut off. They are made of a weak form of a jean type material. His shoes, well more like boots are a size eleven with more studs on the tip of his boot. But as like the others, they cannot pierce skin. They are made of a black leather with steel at the tip so he wont ever stub his toes.

History: Ryu's family was literally at the bottom of the list when it came to having money. See his mom died when she was giving birth to him and it was just him and his dad. And of course being a heart broken father he tried to find love again. Things go good for a while and his father meets a young woman named Fran. Her and his father were together for almost three short damned years. Three too many if you ask Ryu. But Fran was able to support him and his dad.

She helped Ryu get into a school for young boys. Which meant him being shipped out of his home to some place he had never been. At this time he was only eleven. Six long, six painful and shitty years later he finds his way home. To find his home not the same, his father a old man and deaf, while Fran is young as ever. He manages to sly his way back in and gather his things and leavs in the middle of the day. Broad sunlight and not a cloud in the sky. Well he comes home two years later to find his father dead and Fran at the foot of the bed laughing like a mad man. She yells something unknown to Ryu and vanishes. And ever since then, Ryu has been on her trail, hunting her and hoping to kill her soon.

Skills:
Red Queen : Able to ignite on fire for up to one minute and not hurt anyone unless he means harm to that person. Also feeds off of negative feelings.

Azure Lightning : Able to purify a normal human soul. As like the Red blade, the Blue Blade feeds off of positive feelings.

Able to control wind in a five yard radius all around him.

Both : Unable to dull.

Release : Due to him being something other then human, he has this ability that allows him to go 1.5 faster then usual. His strength as well doubles to 1.5 times stronger then normal.

Equipment: Two magical steel blades that are thirty-sex inches from blade tip to the guard. the hilt itself is six inches. The blades represent two elements. The red blade represents fire, anger and all negative feelings in this world. The blue blade represents water, love and all the positive feelings as opposed to the red blade. The red blade and blue blade do not have names but they do have engraved words along both sides of the blades. The red blade has Brisinger Raudhr. And the blue blade has Adurna engraved.

He also carries a small satchel that holds :
One water skin
One small coin pouch that can hold up to one thousand pieces of gold.
One small single person blanket.

Familiars: N/A

Taskmienster
03-09-09, 06:29 AM
I don't mean to be rude, but this character feels like a mix between Shihormau (sp?) and Inuyasha. [Red and Blue blades]. And without a history to go off of it won't feel different. As as well as drop the strength down to 1.5 times stronger, and you should probably give yourself some skill with the swords.

ninja_person
03-09-09, 08:31 AM
Well that is kinda where I got the idea but I changed it around a bit and made something new. But I added one skill for both swords and changed the strength.

Taskmienster
03-09-09, 08:54 AM
Please reduce the fire to a minute, and remove either the fire or wind spell (as well as drop those down to 5 yards).

Also, are those spells from the swords? Or do the swords have their own set of spells?

ninja_person
03-09-09, 08:59 AM
The fire spell on Azure Lightning is a spell on the sword itself. So no incantation or anything required.Removed the spell from Red Queen. And edited as necessary.

Taskmienster
03-09-09, 10:04 AM
Alright, just be very careful with the wind control within 5 yards. If you use it only manipulate it one thing at a time, like a single small gust or hardened air.

Approved.