Get a grip! (battle request)

[Runeologic]

Well, with this character and currently my favourite, I would like to get a proper feel for him by having a battle with someone... well, that's about all, I have nothing really specific in mind, just a citadel battle.

You can tell I'm no good at sociability. ^_^;;

[Taskmienster]

I'll fight you.

[Runeologic]

Ok, should be...interesting, should I just make a battle in the citadel or something?

[Taskmienster]

Haha. Got the PM, going to work on the post now. I'm not the fastest, but I should be able to post once a day at least.

[Runeologic]

That's fair enough.

Since the battle has started, would it be possible to use this thread to offer advice to me along the way so I can attempt to improve any points as we go and be told if I am doing it correctly or not. I feel I am not too strong a writer and any help from anyone would be well...helpful.