Eruvilui
07-02-09, 05:39 PM
So I saw a thread like this one earlier, and I thought it sounded like a good idea. I apologize, but I am on a work computer that doesn't let me view the web address of my thread, so I can't post a link. It is the thread "These Hands That Are Holding You" in Scara Brae. I will post a link when I am on a computer that can, or if someone would be so kind as to post one in the first reply that'd be great. I have noticed that there are a pretty healthy number of views already, so hopefully you guys that read it will comment.
I pretty much know what I am going to do with the story, but I'd like to get feedback on what people think about my writing style. Positive and negative comments are desired, and while I would like to say I'll try to please everyone I know that I can't, so I won't.
Thank you all in advance for your comments and I hope you enjoy the first chapter in the story of Eruvilui Megiltura.
I pretty much know what I am going to do with the story, but I'd like to get feedback on what people think about my writing style. Positive and negative comments are desired, and while I would like to say I'll try to please everyone I know that I can't, so I won't.
Thank you all in advance for your comments and I hope you enjoy the first chapter in the story of Eruvilui Megiltura.