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ZoneGRagnarok
07-18-09, 11:36 PM
Name: Zangrim Deepstorm of Clan Ragefist
Age: 48
Race: Dwarf
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Grey
Height: 4'9"
Weight: 215
Occupation: Hunter/Woodcutter/Butcher

Personality: Zangrim is a dwarf who requires more space than the average dwarf. He prefers the outdoors, letting the breeze blow through his beard and feeling the rain on his face. He usually calm and collected, keeping to himself. This can change though when he gets truly excited, namely after a good hunt or during a night of drinking.

Appearance: Looks like a ranger who just dragged himself through the woods. Wears dark green and brown leather armor, with his axe strapped across his back. He slings his crossbow over his shoulder with the quiver of bolts on his side. His short beard and hair are well cared for, while his easy stance and scanning eyes bestow a feeling of alertness.

History: Hired by Tordek as part of a new expedition to Boatmurdered, Zangrim accompanied his new companion to what would be a future haven of dwarfs, lured by the promise of as much booze as he could drink and a untouched land full of game for hunting.

Skills: Above Average Ambusher
Above Average Crossbow skills
Average Butcher
Average Hunter
Below Average Axe skills
Below Average Wood Cutter

Equipment:
Bronze Great Axe- A notched but well cared for great axe. Seen more use chopping trees then chopping heads.
Oak Crossbow- Zangrim's well loved crossbow. Has many notches on the shoulder rest for his successful hunts. Due to extend use though, it takes a bit longer than usual to reload (10 second reload).
Leather Armor- More like Zangrim's choice of vest. Throw on some dark brown and green pants and other ranger gear to help blend in with the vegetation, as well as helping keep the sharp sticks and thorns of the forest from sticking ya when your sneaking up on lunch.

Witchblade
07-18-09, 11:47 PM
Hi there and welcome to Althanas! I'll be going over your profile with you. It's clear you're not new to role-playing as a whole, but you'll need a few edits before I can set you free on the whole of Althanas. ^_^

Leather rmor - this may cover his torso.

Oak Crossbow - I'm not a fan of allowing crossbows for level 0 characters, but I'll approve it if you give it a 10 second reload/delay time.

Skills - it may look better if you divide the skills up individually.

First off, he has two weapon skills, his Axe and his Crossbow. He may be Below Average in one and Above Average in another.

He may be Above Average as an ambusher, and Average as a Butcher and Average as a Hunter. Below Average as a wood cutter.

Make those changes and you should be good to go. ^_^

ZoneGRagnarok
07-19-09, 12:12 AM
Alright, I think that will do it. Whats the normal reload time for a crossbow?

Witchblade
07-19-09, 08:49 AM
I don't really think we have an 'average' reload time for crossbows, however, I know some people have automatic containers on theirs that allow for instantaneous reload.

Approverized!