How Not to Write on Althanas... or anywhere... but worth a big laugh!

[Slavegirl]

So my friend Zack made me go to this link, and I about fell on the floor laughing so hard - especially when it came to the "dramatic reading" of this particular "work". Even the reader can't stop laughing near the end.

Click here for lots of lulz... (http://myimmortalrehost.webs.com/index.htm)

[Raphai]

I couldn't get through it was so horrible...

[Mouse]

I think everyone has to start somewhere. For good sport, here (http://www.fanfiction.net/u/73088/Vegetas_Embodiment) is a link to the DBZ fanfiction I wrote my senior year of high school, when I was 16/17. :P Yeah, try and get through any of those without vomiting. And there were people who actually told me it was fabulous and bugged me at school wanting to know when the next piece would be up on fanfiction.net.

[Dale*Hathaway]

lol, i read the first chapeter and my head hurt, hope thats not what my writings are like,

[Nevermore]

I can feel my retinas burning.

This can't have any effort put into it whatsoever, or else the laws of physics have suddenly erased themselves.

[Damion Shargath]

There's no way I will ever read that bullshit. A brief look is far more than enough already...fucking hell...

[Arsène]

Greatest novel in history.

[Enther]

You people wouldn't know good writing if it was so horrible you couldn't tell it was amazing.

[Slayer of the Rot]

You people wouldn't know good writing if it was so horrible you couldn't tell it was amazing.

Yes. The furries always did know who was an excellent writer.

[googlyeyesultra]

You all are just preps for not realizing the greatness of "My Immortal."

Okay, I can't type that with a straight face. My true reaction falls closer to "Uuugh! Facepalm facepalm facepalm urg!"

[AdventWings]

...Ow. My eyes.

Just reading the first sentence gives me so much paaaaiiiinnn...

And 2xx words do not make a chapter! Even light novels aren't that short...

(In all honesty, though, Raven does seem to be a popular name with the "gothic" crowd.)

Disclaimer: "Raven Adventwings" and "Raven" from My Immortal are in no way related to each other. No, seriously.

[Kerrigan Muldoon]

I liked it a lot!

Seriously, it gives you way more lulz then any thread here :).

[Arsène]

I liked it a lot!

Seriously, it gives you way more lulz then any thread here :).

Not true. (http://www.althanas.com/world/showthread.php?t=19582)

That is lulz both well written, and well lulzy.

[Kerrigan Muldoon]

Dang, that was funny :D. It's a pitty Homunculus stopped it so suddenly though, they should have continued like that :).

[Lord Anglekos]

I come back for two moments, and this atrocity greets my vision.
...
...Ow, goddamit. Now I need glasses for reading.