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Ultimate Weapon
08-04-09, 02:00 AM
Name: Sefirosu
Age: 28
Race: human/ higher being
Hair Color: Sliverish white
Eye Color: ocean blue
Height: 6'0
Weight: 225
*Occupation: Ex : Soldier

*Personality: Sefirosu is not a man who you want to catch on a bad day. The best advice would be to just stay away from him. One look at him wrong could wind up getting you killed. the wrong words could get you killed.

Appearance: Standing at a six foot even, Sefirosu is a sight to behold. With his bright ocean blue eyes and cat like slits. His hair is a sliverish white and long enough to be put in a ponytail. His coat is a black leather trench coat with steel shoulder pads to help protect his arms. Black leather straps cover his bare chest which is fine tuned to perfection. His legs are covered in black leather. His feet are covered by black leather combat boots. No straps no nothing.

History: 28 years have past in Sefirosu's life. The only memento he has of either of his parents his is unusual blade. The Masamune blade. For some odd reason, Sefirosu has this strange urge to want to rule this planet. No matter who gets in his way, no matter the cost.Sefirosu is also on the hunt to find out who his parents are. His only clue is on a piece of paper that he always carries with him. On this paper reads "In the blood lies the ..." and that is all that is legible. So for 28 years he has been looking for his parents and the key to rule the world.

Skills: Above average swordsmanship.
Speed - 1.5 times average

Equipment: One Seven ft steel katana named Masamune.
Unable to be used by anyone other then Sefirosu. Steel shoulder pads to protect the shoulders and upper forearms.

Taskmienster
08-04-09, 02:20 AM
Welcome to the site, I'll be helping you out with this profile.

Just a few things:

~ You can't, at this level, slice through any materials, so please remove that.

~ Above average speed can be at most 1.5x average.

~ We don't have a Japan, Earth, or anything from this world or ancient era's on Althanas. So you'll need to change that as well.

It would also be nice if half of this wasn't copy/paste from the wikipedia entry.

Also: Is the blade 17 feet? Or is it one foot seven inches? That should be clarified.

Ultimate Weapon
08-04-09, 02:25 AM
Sorry, I guess I kinda got carried away. But ok, everything is changed. He has A single seven foot katana.

Taskmienster
08-04-09, 02:35 AM
On last thing, just for a side note. A person who is 6 feet and 135 pounds would be uber frail. Like, smaller than me skinny... and that's hard to do. I'd suggest bumping his weight up a bit. If you want him to remain skinny, a healthy skinny weight would be 150. If you want him to be medium build, around 180 pounds. Heavy build would be around 200-225 pounds.

Ultimate Weapon
08-04-09, 02:41 AM
Yeah, I would of never caught that. thank you for the point out.

Taskmienster
08-04-09, 02:52 AM
Alrighty, you are approved.

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