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black knight
08-08-09, 02:03 PM
Name: Issac 'Black Knight' Smith
Age: 67
Race: Human / Demon
Hair Color: Bald
Eye Color: Crimson Red
Height: Six foot Five
Weight: 250 without armor. 265with armor
Occupation: Slave / Killing Machine

Personality: The one known as Black Knight has no personality. He shows no feelings or signs of remorse when he commits a crime. To those who see him, at first he looks like a walking suit of armor. His voice is deep and dark. The first thing on him that is visible that is not black, are his eyes. And they are crimson red. To those who know him would describe him as one word. Unstable.In other words, he can break at any second, even if it is quiet all around. Due to him being a slave, he has a master. His master's name is

Appearance: Standing over six foot tall, Issac Smith is a sight not many see daily. His eyes pierce the darkness with a gaze that would scare almost anyone. His armor is pure onyx black. On the darkest of nights, you would not even be able to see this man if he was standing in front of you with his eyes closed. His voice is deep, dark, and hoarse. Almost as if he was possessed. His armor is heavy and yet thin. It is only as strong as the everyday steel material. The only part of the armor not black is the insignia; A reddish dragon with it's wingspan open all the way with flames spewing out of the mouth.

History: Issac's memory is a blur from the moment he met his new master. Sort of like amnesia, except that nothing will help him remember. His master has wiped everything out of his mind except the urge to kill and serve his master.

Skills: Above Average Strength,
Above average axe-wielding,
'Toyvase' - Able to encase an area of ten by fifteen feet in total darkness. The darkness is magical and therefore grants Issac the ability to see in this darkness. the downside to this is that it can be blown away with a strong enough wind gust or purified with a strong enough light spell. If people are able to use darkness spells, they are able to see through it. People could see something like gray outlines in the darkness.The more tainted the heart, the better they can see. Toyvase produces such a dark cloud that is slightly possible to see inside with the right lighting.

Armor - Dark magic resistance - 10%
Light magic resistance - 110%

Prediction - Able to forsee an object aimed at Issac. Able to dodge, but not very well yet. Two times a thread.

Equipment:
One double bladed axe made of steel.
One satchel of gold coins. Able to hold up to two-hundred gold coins for now.
One axe sharpening stone.
Three throwing daggers made of steel.
Five packages of armor cleaning/repairing kits.
Two Arm guards to protect his lower arms
Two leg guards to protect his legs.

Taskmienster
08-08-09, 02:09 PM
Could you please list your skills in an order that is easier to read them. Such as a space between each one?

Above average strength can be at 1.5x average.

Average speed doesn't need to be there if he's just average at it.

Toyvase: What type of darkness is it? Magical and can't be seen through? Natural but just really dark? Does it do anything like damage? Does it affect Issac?

Armor: Please change the dark spells resistance to 10%. That would make it fair for the light damage to be 110%. Also, how much armor is there? What is it made of? What does it cover?

Please reduce your throwing daggers to 3 for now, and if you'd like to use them I'd suggest that you have some skill for them added in.

Ultimate Weapon
08-08-09, 03:07 PM
Ok done and edited.

Taskmienster
08-08-09, 04:09 PM
Again. Darkness needs to be edited. It's magic, but can it be seen into, or outside of? Does it affect Issac? How long does it last?

Prediction cannot be able to block small objects as you say it does. That's too strong for this level. The best I could allow would be that you can see an object coming at you a couple times a thread, and have the ability to possibly dodge it. However, since you don't have enhanced speed or reflexes, that wouldn't be realistic.

Armor can be iron for now, and you can have two pieces. Arm guards are a single piece, as are plates to cover your legs. Choose which two pieces you want, and make it iron.


Finally, please respond with the actual character you started the thread with, not an alt. Thanks.

black knight
08-08-09, 07:20 PM
Ok it is formatted to what you ask. And I am sorry. I thought I was on the right one.

Taskmienster
08-08-09, 11:35 PM
Alright, last thing. You said you can see in the darkness, but nobody else can. Please change that. If people are able to use darkness spells, they should be able to see through it. Also, I'd like it if people could see something like gray outlines in the darkness, so it's fair. I can't allow you to cast something that only you can see in, it would be completely unfair. So, within the shadows your opponents AND you see those shadowed silhouettes.

black knight
08-09-09, 03:15 AM
Alright done and edited.

Taskmienster
08-09-09, 03:25 PM
Alrighty, thanks for being amiable about it. Sorry it took so long. Just be careful with the darkness ability!

Approved.