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Pyraqua
09-26-09, 09:28 AM
Name: Szynn Jaquon
Age: 14 (immortal)
Race: Human (gifted)
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Grey
Height: 4'10
Weight: 73 lbs.
Occupation: Rogue

Personality: Always cautious, Szynn trusts no one completely. She is always looking out for new ways to get food, money, shelter. The few people she has gotten to know well know that she is spunky, adventurous, and occasionally rash. Being on her own for years has given her a sense of fearlessness, but not taken away caution.

Appearance: Szynn has long, thick black hair, usually down or piled somewhat carelessly on top of her head. She has grey eyes, dark skin, and usually wears a silver-grey Greek-style chiton, just above her knees, with silver sandals that wrap around up to her knees. She seems to blink less than normal people, giving the impression that she is always staring at something of great interest.

History: Szynn grew up an orphan, her parents having been killed by a band of goblins at age 3. She has roamed around several countries since, and has more experience than many grown men. In Coroné, she is having success at pickpocketing, stealing from crowded markets, and occasionally cheating clueless groups of gnomes in card games.

Skills: Szynn has always excelled at archery, and is learning the art of fencing. She is gifted, but her abilities are erratic and still developing. She must fight to keep them under contol. She is developing the ability to create illusions, to make people or herself see things that aren't there. She also suspects that she may be able to read minds, but this is very uncertain.

Equipment: Szynn travels with a small pack. She has daggers and vials of poison and other various nasty things hidden all about her person, just in case. A quiver and a silver bow belonging to her late father are slung across her back. She also has an enchanted flask given to her by her mother that never runs out of water.

Familiar: King Walter is a former king of a far, far away land. He was transformed, however, into a small, white, furry creature with snowy feathered wings (which are utterly useless) and large brown eyes. He is about the size of a guinea pig, with tufty ears and a wet, bear-like nose. This transformation was a result of two Dark Wizards fighting for King Walter's kingdom, each attempting to transform him into something different. They accidentally created an entirely new species, and in their surprise the prince killed them both. King Walter found Szynn in a forest many miles from there and has followed her, perching on her shoulder, since.

Taskmienster
10-02-09, 02:24 PM
Sorry about not seeing this, it was in the updates forum instead of the new character approval forum... so I missed it. Ooops.

Please edit the skills so that they are separated instead of clumped together in one paragraph. Archery can be above average for now, not excellent, and fencing can be average. Illusions should only affect people your level for now, and be no more that visual, and slightly auditory, but affect no other senses. Reading minds should be limited to only the very weak minded, since you are very uncertain if you have it.

The daggers, you can have 2 right now, either iron or steel quality. I'll have to ask that you remove the vials of poison for now, though you can gain them in a quest or purchase them at a later point from the Bazaar should you wish to do so. Also, the arrows can be oak shafts with iron tips, only 12 of them at this time. The bow can be silver, but cannot be sold.

King Walter needs to have his personal abilities with fighting listed, if there are any present. Also, can you talk to the familiar? Or is it just a bear-guinea pig-bird creature? I mean, if it's half each, then it's gonna have to be approved by Gore. :p j/k, of course.

Make those edits and I'll come back after you post to tell me you've made them and approve this for you. Thanks, and welcome to Althanas!