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fallenskillz
10-05-09, 11:01 PM
Name:Fallen
Age: 80
Race:Dwarf
Hair Color:Burgundy Purplish streaks
Eye Color: Hazel
Height: 4'8''
Weight: 180 lbs.
Occupation: Black Smith
Language: Dwarfish

Persnonality: Natural, He's people always were cautious and never trusted anyone with this beliefs he's always cautious aswell, but once you get to know him hes just as wise as any good hearted beings. He turned easly furious if things don't go hes way or if hes really insulted of hes beliefs or anything will tick him off.Other than hes a good fella...

Apperance: Dwarf light brown skinned Long beared, purple clothing due to magical armor with small orbs. Wears a crown from since hes father was a king makes him the "prince". They say he's half human and dwarf, but he's father wont say much of he's envolment with a female human, that might explain hes a little bigger than hes own race.

History: Hes father was a ruler of a race..take over by some clan and left it deserted only a few members of hes clan exist's escaped from battle to secure the scrolls of hes fathers kingdom. Most of them were skilled metal craftsmen and believers in astronomy linkaged to unknown meditation powers due to there red moon believes etc...

Skills:

Black-Smith : Metal craftsmen in weapons and or metal works. All he's race are good metal workers and mining abilities beyond someone's scope and imagination. He got a strong knowledge of all the metals known to everyone and some that don't know some metals exist. He welds with some abilities not known to many making metals bend sometimes at will nor throwing liquid metal projections.

Magic: Magic or not it seems he can focus with some metal forces making metal move,bend by some sort of focused meditations. Hes staff made out of oak, holds a metal designs fixed to it might of been by some un-existent alloys not of hes plane or planet, this can explain why he's father ruled for so many and explaining the arts of craftsmanship or even mechanical machinary for there complex architectures deep in the mountains and even craft. He's staff may be used as a welding and heating tool.

Fighting: All dwarfs high in ranks of the kingdom are very well prepared for combat. He skilled in swords, daggers all weapons available that are made. He's choice is a hammer and short sword both made of pure gold melted with some other unknown metal, all children of the king has there special gold made weapons of there choice.

Writer: Good knowledge of ancient Dwarf wisdom and very knowledgeable in there soroundings and good map makers written in altitudes no one knows how they were written been in a high alttitude for such presicion made maps.

Equipment: staff,hammer,small sword, unknown metal orbs lights up during star alignments,scrolls and maps.

familiars: in some deep meditations to the red moon and silver star they say a small little polished metal dragon appears crawling around hes pockets...

Mutant_Lorenor
10-05-09, 11:13 PM
Okay my friend, welcome to Althanas. Just gotta ask you to make a few quick edits.

@Your Skills. They are too vague. Please pick only two-three skills that you really want to have. Explain what the skills do and you're good to go. Note, for the metal-craftsmen skill you can craft up to Average quality Items with the Metals Iron, Copper, Tin, etc. You can craft up to Steel.

@Your Weapons. Staff--Needs to be made of Oak or Yew. Hammer is fine for smithing. Small Sword-Needs to be made of Iron. You probably can't have the Unkown Orb. You have to define what it does. Even if it's a Quest Item ONLY you still have to define this. We don't Power-Game on Althanas. Scrolls--You probably can't start with any Scrolls as these Items would easily get power-gamed without definition.

Make these edits and you are good. Remember, you can have up to Average Skill level in your Skills. So write out your Skills like that. When you're done picking what you want, we'll talk.

fallenskillz
10-06-09, 11:59 PM
Ok, well he just messes with metals, equipped with a hammer what other skills should I erase or leave off?

Taskmienster
10-14-09, 07:59 PM
Please set your blacksmithing to average skill currently, with the ability to work on iron and steel metal for now.

For the metal magic, please make sure that you are very careful with it... and that you don't manipulate too much at a time. I'd say it would be fine to manipulate no more than the metal that it would take to make a short sword for now.

Please change your fighting ability with hammers and swords to average and below average, you can pick which goes where.

In the equipment section :: staff is oak, so make a note of that please next to it in the equipment area; Hammer and sword need to be made of iron or lesser (though I'm not sure if you intend to have them as gold or not. If so, you can have gold plating, but an entirely golden weapon could neither be sold, nor realistically useful as it is an extremely malleable metal). Are the scrolls anything special? Or just general writing stuff like books?