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OvidThePoet
10-21-09, 07:39 PM
Keywords:
Baseball
Read Future
psychic

Name: Ovid
Age: 15
Race: Human
Hair Color: Dark green hair with white in the middle.
Eye Color: white eyes
Height: 5”7
Weight: 140
*Occupation:

*Personality: Can be easily frustrated when things don't go his way. Very arrogant when thinking about how people are which leads him to being independent(always wanting to do things by himself) and tend to get nervous often. The more nervous he gets the more adrenaline rushes despite his constant fear of dying he loves the excitement of being in danger.

Appearance: Ovid wears a black robe and on the back he has two white leathered zeros stitched with his name above it like a baseball jersey. The steel bat strapped on the back covering the number diagonally.


History:
Ovid was abandoned by his parents, on the day he was born. His parents shunned him because of his white hair in the middle and his eyes deemed to be scary. A master mage adopted this child and made him go through regular activities. Just like the other students, he learned how to perform magic. He had immense power but did not know how to control it.

One evening Ovid was walking in the desert near the academy. Thinking many thoughts as usual, wondering why his magic is not stable. Ranting out loud, bursting with frustration as he walked further away from the academy. Suddenly, his left eye felt like there was something in it. I black spot that grew bigger by the second. Within two minutes after he encountered this dot, both of his eyes were now fully black.

Weird images started to flash within the darkness. These images were very confusing. Ovid did not know how to comprehend this. The audience was cheering for the players in the middle of the stadium.

He looked at the only player who was moving at the moment. A player who was holding a baseball glove instantly threw his pitch. Although Ovid did not understand the concept of the game, he was amazed witnessing how alive those competitors were.

Embracing how players there threw the ball around the stadium. All the anger he built up inside not being able to perform magic, slowly faded away. His hands were moving towards his face automatically, covering his eyes, filling it with more darkness. When Ovid regains control of his hand, he pulled it away from his eyes.

Tears fell onto a baseball that was lying before him.

However those tears were full with joy and excitement.
Ovid then took the ball and brought it with him as he went back to the Academy.

“You made us worried Ovid. Do you not know you still need to pass the exam tomorrow? In which you will be fighting someone else who is also showcasing their skills.” The doorkeeper said showing some concern towards Ovid.

“Sorry, I had you worry about me. I just needed time alone to think about what skills I would use in the exam.” Ovid replied in a nervous tone but tried to hide his nervousness with a smile.

The doorkeeper grunted then sighed. Knowing Ovid and that he is powerful but so powerful he is not able to control it. He would always burn all of his energy before he could do anything. “Good luck” the doorkeeper said.





Skills:
Sprint- Can steadily runs between 10mph


fireball(can only be thrown 3 times a day)- 20-35 mph the baseball is the core of the fireball. the radius between the baseball and fire barrier is 2.87in x 3


Clairvoyance*passive*- enhance sensing abilities could also lead to predicting an opponents actions (with their permission)

Orb ball(can only be used once every 3 hrs)- replenishes 20-30 percent of minor injuries

Combat skill- average baseball skills used when in close range combat (bat made out of steel)and the concussion rate is close to what a hammer gives

Equipment:
Iron bat
Baseball
Sphere(in order to heal and also allows clairvoyance)

Mutant_Lorenor
10-22-09, 08:23 PM
I'll take this thread. My suggestion is to look at completed profiles in the Registration archives. I will talk to you on Messenger as well so we can discuss what types of skills and equipment your character should/can have. To keep things level and fair. Hit me up on messenger next time you're on and we'll break down your character. I'll allow the Speed Skill so far as long as you don't power-game it. Just make one minor edit. Ovid can move at 10 MPH's and you're good. Make that edit so far and then we'll continue with the rest of your stuff.

OvidThePoet
11-08-09, 05:24 PM
I made some changes sir!

Taskmienster
11-09-09, 06:19 PM
I'd like to ask that you don't use the precognition in any situation without the permission of others in the thread, be it a battle or a quest.

Other than that, you still need a small section outlying what you have as far as personal items (weapons, armor, and general items). I see you listed a steel baseball bat at one point, but without a list of what equipment you have it makes it difficult for others to know. Also, you'll need skills for weapons like that, at this point, with the other abilities you have, I'd allow you to have below average skill with the baseball bat.

Edit that stuff in, and you should be good to go!

OvidThePoet
11-10-09, 10:13 PM
made the changes sir

Taskmienster
11-11-09, 02:13 PM
Looks good. Welcome to the site!

Approved.