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Gyzmo Gadjiltron
11-10-09, 07:28 PM
Name: Gyzmo Gadjiltron
Age: 16
Race: Human/Machine
Hair Color: Light Hazelnut
Eye Color: Emerald Green
Height: 5'07
Weight: 62 Kg
Sex: Male

Occupation: Gyzmo builds technology, gear, and random gizmo's. (Get it?). For usually himself, but whenever he needs more money for better equipment or to upgrade his materials he sells weapons to mercenaries, assassins, and military bases.

Personality: Gyzmo is really timid, he doesn't like to participate with conversations or talk to new people. But whenever he mans up, he does. But other than being timid, Gyzmo is really dependable[B] whenever he has friends (Which he doesn't have any.) he will try his best to keep them, and keep them company. Gyzmo only problem with people are just spy's, he cannot bear with them; one time a person tried to befriend with him, he just tried to steal his stuff. But he vowed never to let that happen again, so Gyzmo may be a little gullible, but he is not stupid. He is highly intelligent for a teenager, probably smarter than any adult in South America.

[B]Appearance: Gyzmo just wears street clothes, almost the same garments. Like a coffee brown jacket he has been wearing ever since he could remember. Random undershirts. Grey jeans, that were usually cut up and worn out, and some worn out tennis shoes. Also, Gyzmo wears glasses, he can't see for beans.

History: So begins Gyzmo's history, he was born and raised in Brazil, Brasília. As being raised, he was the son of a great renaissance engineer. So of course, being the son. He loved his father, so he loved machinery at a young age. At the age of 8, Gyzmo spotted his mother cheating on his father during a ceremony in church which shattered his heart into million of pieces, like a glass falling down from a clumsy grasp. So one day, when she was cooking dinner Gyzmo had entered the kitchen, so being as a mother she greeted him and offered to bake something for him. But instead, all she got was a pierce through the stomach by a shard of metal that Gyzmo built in his young age.

His father of course didn't know what overwhelmed his son, so he punished him. Severely.
So throughout his childhood, Gyzmo's left eye had payed the price. It was camouflaged to look like a realistic human eye, but behind the lie it was a Artificial Eye. A.E.. So much later on, when Gyzmo turned 12 he moved out because he couldn't bear to live at his house anymore, he was accused of murder and whatnot. He did kill his mother, but he just didn't say why. He had photographs to prove his innocence but he misplaced it, so with that he was nothing but a murder, a scum, a problem, a accident.

Feeling so ashamed he decided to leave Brazil, but that's when his father discovered his errors. He found the visual aids that made his son overwhelm to kill his mother, so with the guilt inside him. He decided to end his own life, but first he wanted to give his son the ultimate gift that any boy with a love of robotic science could ever want.

So Gyzmo packed his stuff in his Grandfathers forest green army backpack which looked really crudely and nasty, and pretty smelly as well. As he headed out the paths to a nearby airport, his obstacle came upon him which was a Brazilian villager that saw him from the news, so he began to beat up Gyzmo maliciously and whatnot, but before he could deliver the final blow to put fear in his body Gyzmo hoisted his same shard metal that he used to kill his own mother to pierce the mans throat, which finished him. But of course, being near an airport, polices took over.

Gyzmo was now in prison, cornering in a room all alone. No regrets, no regrets... Is all he could think about while being confined. Although this day changed his life, when he heard footsteps. And languages unknown to him spoke, probably Portuguese. He only studied English and Spanish. His father appeared before him, Gyzmo couldn't believe it but then again. He could. Because his father probably wanted to punish him for yet another murder, so he waited to see what would happen. Instead his father slipped four large metallic briefcases, that equal the size of a home drawer. Gyzmo did not know what was inside the four cases, so he courageously inched towards the cases, and pressed the buttons on the handles, which let out each a hiss of air escaping.

Four magnificent serpent like creations were bestowed upon him. They were all coiled up into two bodies but still connecting, seeming they were long, they needed all the space so they were tightly wrapped around to the two rods inside the case. Each tentacle were composed of titanium, so Gyzmo researched while living with his father. And something different about the metal made him curious, they sparkled beneath the weak prison lights. As if they were jewels. Which in fact, he looked closely and could see random alignments of diamond shards; he was unsure how his father conjured all of this into four individual bodies, he went to stroke the head of the massive serpents, which their heads had a pyramid shape with a circular bottom.

They activated, they moved like if they were actually serpents from the amazon forest. They all stared at Gyzmo, intently with their heads, which was the brain. And in the brain was a large rock of a ruby jewel. That had nano chips and several wires all throughout the inner body where more wires and machinery were inside, and cogs as well. Which gave them life. The pyramid opened up, which revealed three hook like claws. They each clashed it against each other as they wandered around, then just stared once again at Gyzmo. He raised his hand and touched their heads, as if they were his new pets.
They seemed to liked it, and therefore stayed with him. Gyzmo gave a cautious look to his father, who began to speak about the visual aids of his mother cheating on him and whatnot, then how wrong he was. He gave his life creations to his only son, which were named A.R.T.. Artificial Robotic Tentacles. And now the police being around, were getting suspicious with what was a once a family reunion.

Before Gyzmo could speak to his father, his father held a contraption that contained a black switch which he was unfamiliar with. A detonator. His father spoke as he ate a device what seemed to be a bomb, he was disgusted from the flavor then a bunch of officers began to pounce on him seeing the terrorist endangerment. He said goodbye to his son, before hitting the switch. A explosion appeared beneath the pile of officers all of them getting bombarded as well, as soon the cloud of destruction passed off it revealed just bunch of blood and blown up body parts and unspeakable things that no child should ever see.

So being traumatized forever, Gyzmo didn't have any relatives now. He didn't have a home, and he didn't have friends. Wait, he did. He gave a crazed smile, and the massive serpents that with-stood about 12 feet long glanced at him. They had to register against his body, which Gyzmo did not understand what they were doing, so he was pushed to his stomach, his backpack still strapped onto him with nothing but some sandwiches and money and a few clothes stored inside. They lifted their ends which revealed a sharp shard with several minuscule holes, they all pierced into his back missing his spinal cord on purpose. Gyzmo screamed for his life, the pain was so horrid, he wanted it go away. Inside his body, the rear blades stood still then released out several of wires that seemed to flow throughout his spinal cord and his nervous cords, connecting and synchronizing with his whole body. Their ruby cores glowing with a devilish look, as they revealed each a Roman Number, 'I, II, III, IV.' That was their identification.

So after his father ended his life because of his error of treating and doing weird experiments to his own son, Gyzmo used the chance to escape and leave Brazil, once and for all. And build technology just like his father, and make a better world with them. Or just kill the world to rid of the human problems. Either way, he would have his fun.

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Skills: As growing up with his new friends, I, II, III, and IV. He orchestrated his engineering skills to make weapons for them to add their artillery. Although they each contain strength. Each one may pick up a human weighing less than 120 lbs. The combined of the tentacles strength can be used to pick a small automobile. Just barely, they would struggle.

Also whenever the situation becomes dire, all four of them may assemble each other to form the grandest daddy cannon of all. But will require a turn to use the blast, this would be, The Massive Thunder Blaster. Gyzmo also whenever he wants his opponent to be attacked whenever he or she is unaware, he would release one of his tentacles from his back, and submerge itself underground, unless if its in the air, or in a building. They would use their heads, to make the pyramid formation to then use as a drill to do so and submerge underground, usually called The Submerged Serpent.

As well as having teamwork with each other, whenever A.R.T., are in serious peril they may kick it up a notch. For example, over their entire bodies have slots that would open up and use some Chinese fireworks to confuse opponents with the bright phosphorous wonderful light shows, or attack with some bottle rockets. But getting to the point the massive serpents will release metallic shards all throughout their bodies to coat them with deadly spikes that would damage foes whoever touch them; but since they are just average metal, they could be easily broken with a strong blades, anything that has a extremely rough surface and strength to damage the spikes, but as well. The electrical energy from within the tentacles core bodies can cloak the spikes to make them even more deadlier. But once again, electric energy steals the life of A.R.T.; so only can be used for so long.

And when the moment comes when Gyzmo and A.R.T., become in danger then C.R.U.S.T.A.C.E.A.N., is the ultimate and last known strategy that Gyzmo has. Crustacean Resembling Ultimate Suit Titan Assault Countering Enduring Adulterate Nuisance. Pretty much, all the tentacles begin to coil throughout Gyzmo's arms, legs, body, and head. Shifting their parts to cover his entire body like a shell, then the ruby cores of the serpents would end up in the palms of Gyzmo's hands, and one over his forehead, and the last one over the center of his chest. The claws from the tentacles would end up and magnetize with each other to form a larger claw, which'll resemble a pincer of some sort and for the hell of it maybe a thumb for safety precaution. Also the remaining unused tentacle parts, are ended up as a tail that sticks out from behind Gyzmo's rear which would be pretty useless. And also Gyzmo's eye that his father toyed with when he was little may use it for the time being so he won't pass out from the stress of the pain. His iris would take the shape of a cog and exert his strength more powerful then before, but also his heart would become weak and leave him vulnerable for a short while when he would use it, so it's a double edged sword.

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Equipment: Gyzmo doesn't have any armor, nor a suit of some technology sort. But A.R.T., usually protects him like if they were his body guard, so whenever he gets in trouble, either tentacle will plunge in to save him from whatever the trouble he is in. They have sensors so they could sense all around in a 360 degree, but cannot see invisible figures, or anything underground.

Taskmienster
11-13-09, 12:41 PM
I'm VERY sorry for the wait. I had carbon monoxide poisoning and am still recovering, otherwise this would have been attended to much quicker.

The first thing we need to do in order to get this process on the way and done, so you can get to writing, is to get you to clear up the profile. I'm not sure what I'm looking at or where to finish and start a new paragraph.

So, please put in a space, like I have done between idea's in this response, so that it is much more clear as to what belongs where... after that I'll read over the profile without being a bit confused, lol.

Thanks, and sorry again.

Gyzmo Gadjiltron
11-13-09, 07:12 PM
There, hopefully thats much better homie. :D

Taskmienster
11-14-09, 02:07 PM
For a level 0 character, this is wayyyy too strong.

I assume I through IV are the arms attached? If so, I can't reasonably approve more than two at this point. Four extra arms, on top of your two, is quite a big advantage over other players at the same level, and possibly up to a few levels higher. I'd also like them to be reduced in size to three feet for now.

At this level, you can't be more than 1.5x stronger than average, unless you have other weaknesses to compensate for at most 2x stronger than average. So, the first skill you have is far too strong. However, with those four arms (which should be reduced to 2 arms for now) that would still make him incredibly higher power than other players. So, if you want the two arms, please keep them average strength for this level.

I'm going to have to also ask that you remove the ability to create a "cannon" at this level.

The Submerge ability is fine, so long as the arms don't go further than three feet from your body.

The Cube is too strong, since it could possibly kill anyone... I'm going to have to ask that it be removed for now as well.

The Sphere is too strong at the moment as well. Please remove it.

The last resort method of attack can stay if you'd like, but I'd like you to limit it to just a few fireworks for now, and none that can be used offensively. Also, please reduce the static attack to something very slight in damage, that drains the arms as you have it.

C.R.U.S.T.A.C.E.A.N :: I don't mind the arms being able to wrap around you to create a form of armor, but they can't cover more than your arms for now. They can become claws, but can extend no further than a few inches from your hand. Also, since they are made of common metal, they shouldn't be able to block too much in the way of damage. It should also make you slower when swinging your arms.


I'm not trying to dock your idea, it's really interesting, but it's just too high-tech for Althanas for a level 0 character. There is a lot about technology that makes is far too strong compared to a common, level 0 character for the site.

Gyzmo Gadjiltron
11-14-09, 09:47 PM
I see... I see.. Well, I really don't know what to do then. I could limit the attacks, but I have no clue what to do about limiting the arms. I mean, I'll take away the sphere and cube. But I can add more weaknesses as well? Like Water, Earth, and Wind. So it would be much more harder, but please. I cannot take more of the arms. (Did I also mention that Gyzmo rarely uses his arms, he never uses them for battle. Maybe just to get up whenever he would pick himself up, or pick anything that skewed his body parts. Other than that. He has weak strength, he's not the type to fight his own fights. Hopefully thats a good reason why.)

Unless if it is a only resort, then.. I guess. If that is the only way. Their like the swords to a samurai, without them. A samurai is not a samurai.

Taskmienster
11-19-09, 09:12 AM
If you'd like to keep the arms...

Since four extra arms is quite a big advantage, I'd have to ask that you remove quite a bit of other skills for now. Of course, as time passes and you level a bit more, you could learn more things to do with them, but for now it'd just have to be the arms.

The overall, combined strength of the arms working together can be 2x average strength, so each one separately would only be .5x average (weaker than normal arms).

The Massive Thunder Blast and "But getting to the point the massive serpents will release metallic shards all throughout their bodies to coat them with deadly spikes that would damage foes whoever touch them; but since they are just average metal, they could be easily broken with a strong blades, anything that has a extremely rough surface and strength to damage the spikes, but as well. The electrical energy from within the tentacles core bodies can cloak the spikes to make them even more deadlier. But once again, electric energy steals the life of A.R.T.; so only can be used for so long." All of that are going to have to go for now.

And, when you use them to wrap around your arms, they are going to be like little more than metal gauntlets with claws on them, and you lose the advantage of their combined strength but gain flexible defenses.

The arms can be made of a softer alloy of iron for now, still as strong, but able to be dented and weak against constant attacks.

Gyzmo Gadjiltron
12-01-09, 11:18 PM
Alright sounds magnificent! Thank you so much, I really appreciate it. I can deal with that. Thanks Taskmienster! You really are the most helpful moderator ever.

Logan
12-08-09, 01:18 PM
Sorry this lingered for so long, Gyz. Approved.