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Mistress-Of-The-Maze
12-08-09, 06:21 PM
I've made a few more changes. Hopefully they fit the bill ^.^

Name: Aislynn Labyrintha

Age: 17, though she will reach her 18th birthday in a months time.

Sex: Female

Race: A half breed (Hanyou), Her mother was a Youkai and her father was a human.

Hair Color: Auburn, with slightly copper streaks when in sunlight.

Eye Color: A rich golden yellow that deepens into a light brown when she is angry.

Height: 5ft 6 1/2in

Weight: 9st

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-Occupation-

Due to where she lives, she works as a wood carver. She makes mostly toy's for children along with other items and trades them in the city nearby in order to pay her way.

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-Personality-

She is a quiet person in her own right but not overly so. She's playful when with people she knows or is comfortable with. She is happy with herself and the fact that she is a half breed although she is uncomfortable with the veiws others have on it. She is a naturally placid person and not easily angered but if someone manages to do so, her temper is fierce and she is slow to forgive.

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-Appearance-

Her hair is long and worn bound back into a braid or a high ponytail when working. Due to her lineage, she has usual elven features such as fair skin and a slender frame. Her eyes are almond shaped with long light brown lashes. Her nose is her most unattractive feature, having been inherited from her father. It is long and slightly crooked.

Her clothes are simple and practical, consisting of beige shirt with a dark brown leather belt around her waist, dark brown breeches and a pair of laced boots. During winter, she wears a long forest green coat.

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-History-

She was born in a woodland cabin and raised there by her father, Bayren. Her mother, Sylrae, died during birth. Her father was a wood carver and over the years he taught Aislynn the ways of his trade, starting with small toys and simple wooden musical instruments, along with the occaisional lesson in archery and swordplay.

Untill the age of seven, Aislynn lived her life in the shelter of the woodland; her father would leave her in the cabin when he went to trade. At that age she was curious as to what the outside world would look like and after many days of pleading with him, Bayren relented and allowed her to accompany him to the nearest city under the strict rule that she never leave his side.

Once there, she was entranced by the strange new sights and people and foolishly wandered away from her father. Upon realising her absence, Bayren immediatly began to search for her, eventually finding her whimpering behind a barrel with a black eye and a split lip. After further questioning, he discovered that she had been teased by some local children over her appearance and had gotten into a fight, during which Aislynn gave back as good as she had got.

At fifteen she took over the duty of traveling to the city in order to trade after her father became ill and cared for him till he died a year later. She met her familiar in a glade which to date, she has been unable to find again.

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-Skills-

As stated before she is talented at wood carving. She has passable skills in archery although her battle talents lie more in the art of swordplay.

Her speed is formidable. She is able to easily outrun a horse without even trying and can run for almost a day before she tires. .

She also has the ability to heal, a skill that becomes stronger over time. At the moment it is pretty weak, only being able to heal scrapes and minor cuts and bruises.

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-Equipment-

She owns a pair of steel dual short swords which when worn, are carried in a tanned leather belt worn across her back and chest. When travelling she carries the usual nessessitys for camping along with a small steel dagger hidden in her boot.

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-Familiar-

Her familar is a small demon who shifts shape. His name is Yukito and though he can be brash and rather rude with her and others, he is a steadfast companion. His favourite form is that that of an elflike appearance, with long silver hair and pointed ears. His eyes are dual coloured, one being ice blue, the other a vivid green. He can speak, but rarely does so.

Logan
12-08-09, 10:00 PM
Welcome to Althanas.

I like the character concept from what I see. It's unique enough to be intriguing. Kudos.

If possible, I'd like to see some sort of determination of what she can heal (like minor scrapes and cuts, but nothing deep enough to constitute a gash), of how fast she can run (you only mentioned endurance).

The short swords and dagger are made of steel. The belt is made of tanned leather.

And the familiar, as long as it has no abilities you didn't mention, is acceptable. If it has abilities other than the ability to shift into other forms, you will be unable to use those unless you mention/explain them. They have to be approved, too, after all.

Mistress-Of-The-Maze
12-09-09, 02:30 PM
I've just made the changes you requested. I hope they look okay ^.^' Thank you for the welcome by the way, everyone here seem to be so nice!!

Logan
12-09-09, 08:26 PM
Allright that works.

Like I stated before, the shape-shifting demon thing isn't allowed to use any abilities not listed.

Approved

Good luck!